Lost

I am so lost and just want to be found. I feel like a lonely, scared and unloved hound.

 I know that there's someone out there for me. I'm wearing my lock, now who has my key?

I'm so sick and tired of the lonesome wait. Why cant there be a fast forward button on fate?

 I walk around and see the girls and guys. Together with The smiles on their faces and the love in their eyes.

I long for that again so very badly. But i can't seem to find the one sadly.

I will keep searching for the one who is mine. The one for me that is meant to finish my beautiful rhyme.

Reviews

[bookworm]

We all experience what it is you're describing here. I have felt it so often in my life. And I recall specifically feeling it at your age. I felt so alone and scared that no one understood what I was feeling. But take comfort in knowing that we all do, but folks don't run around screaming it from the rooftops bc we're so afraid of admitting our vulnerabilites. We're afraid that it makes us too different and that others can't relate. I find writing about it trememdously helpful and its such a good idea to surround yourself in a community of people who are willing to share their hurt, pain and loneliness with you. I hope you continue to share your thoughts with us. Thank you.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

The rhythm and flow is stunning! excellent emotional longing in this poem!

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I loved the sentiment in this..and you have a lovely grasp on rhythm and meter..however the structure makes it really difficult to read, as a rhymng piece. I think if you restructed it, with natural breaks after a line, it would flow so much better for the reader. The poem itself has a gentle feel and you captured the vulnerbility that I am sure that we all experience in our lives..

[Michael of Gilead]

Ha! Yes, the well penned frustrations of a 16yr old, and those who've seen and done it already...never changing.

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This is absolutely beautiful. I know how you feel, I'm waiting for mine too. This is absolutely amazing, please, do continue writing. (:

[Priscilla Sayers]

Do not search, open your heart and love will follow. Revealing itself before you as a subtle light that grows into an inferno over time. I only speak of what I know. you write with longing and the yearning is well conveyed. you have spoken to my heart and I bid you tranquility. Find you and he will too.

[Shoeb Karim]

Here come the days of rain,/ come the days of spring,/passing the days of sun and shade,/ I am happy, cause I long for, cause I wait. - based on a song of Rabindranath Thakur.

[KAREN]

This is well written and so relateable to many.

[Hachamecha]

I like it :D it has a soul

[EdwardBlue]

Congratulations on your award!!!