Lost

I am so lost and just want to be found. I feel like a lonely, scared and unloved hound.

 I know that there's someone out there for me. I'm wearing my lock, now who has my key?

I'm so sick and tired of the lonesome wait. Why cant there be a fast forward button on fate?

 I walk around and see the girls and guys. Together with The smiles on their faces and the love in their eyes.

I long for that again so very badly. But i can't seem to find the one sadly.

I will keep searching for the one who is mine. The one for me that is meant to finish my beautiful rhyme.

Reviews

[bookworm]

We all experience what it is you're describing here. I have felt it so often in my life. And I recall specifically feeling it at your age. I felt so alone and scared that no one understood what I was feeling. But take comfort in knowing that we all do, but folks don't run around screaming it from the rooftops bc we're so afraid of admitting our vulnerabilites. We're afraid that it makes us too different and that others can't relate. I find writing about it trememdously helpful and its such a good idea to surround yourself in a community of people who are willing to share their hurt, pain and loneliness with you. I hope you continue to share your thoughts with us. Thank you.

[STAR CHILD]

oh this is sad and painful but their is good news when the time is right you will know it

[FadingShadow]

I know how you feel

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

This is a song.....a song my hearts knows all too well. One day we will both finish our rhyme by looking into the eyes of the one we seek and knowing our journey has just begun. Beautiful words!

[Jennifer]

I feel the same way...

[John Patrick Robbins AK..]

Sometimes the wait is hell but the work that has been created from this is of pure perfection my friend im more than happy you asked me to read this im just sorry i havent read your work sooner you connect with the reader fast and thats very important cheers Gonzo

[Black Swan Poetry]

Very common feelings in this for many I am sure. Nicely done. Just remember much early in life is just practice for later. Remember that and maybe it will make it seem less important. Keep writing!

[Aella.lives]

Oh, wow! I really enjoyed this one!! Awesome, love it!

[TreeSpirit]

Well written! Great beat. I can relate to this it really does suck to be the "odd one out" literally. I am a firm believer that there is someone for everyone so just keep your eyes peeled and expect love at all times keep up the good work!

[Lily Mae]

Always stay true to you and the right ones will be attracted.. :) Now the poem..is great.. I enjoyed it...xo

[SwagMaster]

This was absolutely full of emotion and longing. Loved it.