Night

Night

A Story by Vertigoingnowhere
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The night seems to inspire me

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Lifting my head out of my book, I looked out the window. It was dark. I was puzzled. Last I checked it was the beginning of sunset. I looked up at the clock. The time read 10:25. I set down my book and walked over to the window. I put my hand up against the glass. It was cold. As I opened the window, the cool air seemed to brush up against me with a friendly greeting. I shivered. Walking  over to my closet, I grabbed a sweatshirt and pulled it over my head.Going barefoot, i climbed out the window. I stood on the roof and shoved my hands into my pockets. I walked over to the edge where a tree stood. I climbed onto the tree and started to decend. When i reached the bottom i jumped and landed on the cool grassy foor. It was decorated with dew that glistened in the moonlight. I walked around to the front of the house. I looked up at the dark night sky. I couldn't see much because the trees were blocking most of my view. I walked over to the street. I looked up at the shining, starry night sky. I layed down and stared up at the amazing shimmering sight that rested above my head. It took my breath away...

© 2012 Vertigoingnowhere


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When I was younger I used to love the night and I thought it was beautiful... right now it actually terrfies me (I know thats sad) but anyway this was a nice little stroy and it creates a nice vivid image in the readers head. You also did a great job with the details.

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Great job!! The nght sky is portrayed very beutifully.

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Such a wonderful description, Hannah. When we read what you wrote, it seems that we are going with you in this adventure! Feeling the night, and enjoying the freedom.
*Mary*

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I love the last few lines!

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loved this peice!!

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This piece.. in my opinion was decorated with extraordinary Phrases and displayed a beautifully described scene of night.
Night is indeed a source of inspiration, where we can stand staring the dark, mysterious sky and think about the future possibilities.
Superb creation.
Good job!

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You just personalized the night, in a way that I find very intimate Good job H.

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Rob
I have had such nights where God's peace nearly overwhelmed me. You described it perfectly.

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Definitely well described...
Such an amazing night...Should be much cherished...
Love the concept here...
Well done! :)))

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When I was younger I used to love the night and I thought it was beautiful... right now it actually terrfies me (I know thats sad) but anyway this was a nice little stroy and it creates a nice vivid image in the readers head. You also did a great job with the details.

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My name is Hannah. I am 18 years old and a senior in high school. To my wonderment I am survived it. These are my adventurers and devestations as I stand my ground, cuss out society and of course, th.. more..

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