Brokenhearted...

something i wrote in geometry class after a bad breakup...

I didn't see this coming, not at all that day. It came as a surprise, watching you walk away.

You said it wasn't my fault, that the love you used to feel was gone. All I could think was what went wrong.

When I read your words my heart started drumming. I was in shock, I didnt know what was happening.

Then it hit so hard, my heart is broken. Beyond repair with bleeding cuts and open scars.

 I fell to my knees and stared to ball. I kept on crying and my fist met the wall.

You told me I was your heaven above. but how I read that now is just your dusty old rug.

The pain is bad, how i feel is worse. I'm so sorry heart for all this hurt.

Then I was surprised to hear that you wanted me back, that it was fine and that you wanted to wipe my tears.

You put me through hell, you made me a wreck. You must be on drugs to think I'd take you back.

You said that I should take a chance.I decided to walk, didnt take another glance.

My heart is broken, torn in 2, now all I m gonna do is try to forget you... 

Reviews

[EdwardBlue]

This is reminds me of the resent end to my marriage...
Different in parts but such depth and maturity for such a young person.

[Mary Fioratti]

I think that it is so unreal when we hear "the love is gone"... I remember so well... I was probably in my 20's when I heard that. And the way you described was exactly the way I felt. It seems that the world is BIG and you are just a drop in the ocean.. In my case he did not come back. But I really do not know if I would take him back.... it is hard to forget, but it is worth to try... Liked your free style...
*Mary*

[Aenigmakil]

I like how you've taken us on the journey here, with the happenings and your emotions, ever fluctuating through the pain and then the subsequent strength.
Good on you!

[paradise]

Great job again its really hard to feel so broken and well broken hearted and have to go through crap like that. Good luck and great job

[futurepast.]

The shock of someone leaving you and all the pain that follows. I am really glad that you did not accept him back. I never go back again with someone who broke me as well. We will find better. Nice write.

[5678Dance]

This is really great! cant wait to read more soon!

[....]

So sad, tugged on my heart. Nicely done!