Brokenhearted...

something i wrote in geometry class after a bad breakup...

I didn't see this coming, not at all that day. It came as a surprise, watching you walk away.

You said it wasn't my fault, that the love you used to feel was gone. All I could think was what went wrong.

When I read your words my heart started drumming. I was in shock, I didnt know what was happening.

Then it hit so hard, my heart is broken. Beyond repair with bleeding cuts and open scars.

 I fell to my knees and stared to ball. I kept on crying and my fist met the wall.

You told me I was your heaven above. but how I read that now is just your dusty old rug.

The pain is bad, how i feel is worse. I'm so sorry heart for all this hurt.

Then I was surprised to hear that you wanted me back, that it was fine and that you wanted to wipe my tears.

You put me through hell, you made me a wreck. You must be on drugs to think I'd take you back.

You said that I should take a chance.I decided to walk, didnt take another glance.

My heart is broken, torn in 2, now all I m gonna do is try to forget you... 

Reviews

[Yellow Butterfly]

Broken hearts hurt like hell but they mend and find a way of putting themselves back together again.

Wholesome, stronger, ready to love again!

A beautiful heartfelt write

[Hachamecha]

It's sad, but it was the right thing to turn away the chance. That boy would play with your heart, crushing you so much that you would become hallow. I like it :)
It really expresses your feelings.

[Nish...]

Great poem. Tho the ending was sad, that was the part i loved the most.

[FadingShadow]

This is amazing very sad tho.... I like it!

[Walk away slow poet]

So brillantly said, Made me sad a bit. Well expressed.

[Michael of Gilead]

Nicely said, always a difficult topic.

Nitpicks; broken - broke?
but how I read that now is just your dusty old rug - needs revising
You must be on drugs to think I'd take you back - possible revising

[An owl on the moon]

This made me ache... read your note.. then your heartfelt, painful words... being torn apart... and whether a month, a year, or 20 years, the sorrow and hurt is overwhelming. So powerful, my friend.

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Wow... Who knew we could be so alike? I know how that feels too! Amazing work. Truth is located in everywhere throughout this poem.

[emma]

this is really well done. i liked it:)

[raindroplove]

thank you......thank you ....i need this....