Remember

Whatever you do kid, remember who you are.

When the storms overhead, remember the stars.

When you’re feeling dark, remember the sun.

If you’re looking for an answer, it’s not with a gun.

If you’re feeling stressed or depressed,

Remember that organ inside your chest.

And when you feel as if you’re drowning,

And the demons swallow all of your surroundings,

Remember some things that aren't’t so scary.

Like Saturday mornings of Tom and Jerry.

The morning after a midnight rain,

Has that sort of scent you just can't explain.

Or that song of yours you put on repeat,

The way it makes you jump and move to the beat.

Instead of thinking of the pain in your heart,

Remember you’re a work of art.

So don’t lose yourself just yet.

Don’t worry, panic or fret.

Everyone feels a little rain run down their spine.

But rainbows can’t exist without you, sunshine.

Reviews

[parkerjeslick]

Great stuff! Nice work Hannah!!!

[I Am Svetlana]

I loved the message you conveyed in this piece and also the imagery. We all seem to forget the good things in our lives once something bad happens. We forget how pretty the rain looks and sounds, the way the snow falls, we even forget about those who care about us and assume we are too messed up for any of them to love us. Certain people will love us unconditionally and we often try whatever we can to try and push that, to prove it false. And yes, each human body is a work of art, I loved the wording of that and we should do our best everyday in order to make ourselves feel good. We all deserve the same amount of happiness as others have, we don't deserve to face or be stuck alone in the dark and feel like no one loves us. We have to find a way to make our own happiness and make it last and cover up the darkness once and for all.

[Neon]

Yeah! It does work. Your Rhythm is very nice & I really enjoyed reading this piece. You've already a very great talent of writing so keep writing and keep exploring your skills every-day. Keep on!
Have a very nice day!

[Carl Drake Barnard]

This is the,best poem ever!! :) love the way you wrote this! And the rain part,did you know that is my favored smell like ever!! Fantastic! I love it :)

[BubblingMe]

Yes I agree with this poem, it has so much to say, I love it

[Calibaster]

That is so true! Every cloud has a silver lining! :) ;) Keep up the good work!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A piece that creates a feeling of learning and clam, well done, good read.