Shes a Killer

She needs to be locked away, to protect the sane.

To be given a life sentence, to prevent the pain.

She runs around touching life after life

With a deadly toxin that works like a knife.

Cutting deep into hearts with no intention of mercy.

It’s not her intent, to make such a mess

But she is just under too much stress.

She wants to love, she wants to feel

She just can't figure out what is real

She cannot trust what is capable of lies

Because she's been down that road too many times,

She figures, "Why go through hell, just to feel the butterflies that will just end up dead?

How can someone so wicked, find happiness in the end?"

Reviews

[Mashairi]

*Low whistle* nice work, and what a great way of conveying such a message ^^

[parkerjeslick]

Great rhyme structure and deep message! Good work!

[Alex Vidmar]

Sounds like this would make interesting Death Metal lyrics. Love the song!

[Calibaster]

This is so true. Really deep too. :) Nice job!

[Different Wings]

Great! I don't know if you were intending this, but as I read it it started to become slam poetry in my head- or even hip-hop. It has good breaks and integrated rhymes, and it's neither too abstract nor too blatant to seem simple. Looking forward to more :)

[Talal Hussain]

Very nice Hannah...keep writing :-)

[isus]

title reminds me of a Queen song killer queen. great write!

[Emmy]

Ok great poem! The last few lines, gosh so true for me too