More of a Teenage Quote.

More of a Teenage Quote.

A Poem by Vertigoingnowhere

~Friends are a lot like candy. Sweet, when needed and sour at times. Then before you know it, they've changed and dissolved into nothing but a bitter memory left on your tongue. -HSA

© 2013 Vertigoingnowhere


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Interesting observation...but not all memories become bitter..and I know, people can be that mean, leaving your side. I say steer clear of hoes. O_O

Posted 11 Years Ago


To be honest, I don't understand why the memory must be bitter.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

yes, it can be like that...

i have had those kinds of friends....but live long enough and we experience the real friendships...i have some that have lasted 50, 40 , 30 years...

and they are priceless.

Posted 11 Years Ago


An interesting thought. The metaphor is solid, and I like it :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very well put. You are a deep-thinker, me thinks. :) That was very cute, thanks for sharing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


you've suddenly got me thinking of jolly ranchers for some reason. succinctly and profoundly written!

Posted 11 Years Ago


That is a good quote! great job!!


Posted 11 Years Ago


I like the quote. Friendship is hard to maintain. A real friend will tell you the truth in good and bad times. A excellent quote.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


Yes, we've all been there. A great metaphor. Good work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Smart writing, well done! ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Vertigoingnowhere

11 Years Ago

Thank you!

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Sarasota, FL



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My name is Hannah. I am 18 years old and a senior in high school. To my wonderment I am survived it. These are my adventurers and devestations as I stand my ground, cuss out society and of course, th.. more..

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