From The Mind Of A Hopeless, Dreadful Teenager

So back to my couch where i'll binge on Doritos

Just sitting outside being eaten by mosquitoes

Empty ice cream cartons & my baggy sweats.

Endless television marathons with my furry feline pets

Not giving a s**t about those who are ignorant and bent

Because those close minded idiots will hit the cold, hard, cement.

With their opinionated minds and their narcissistic state

Always getting fucked up, only thinking with hate.

But unlike them I’ll sit here in solitude

Not giving a damn, having a slight attitude

Lock me in, close the door.

Let the oxygen thin, and the rain pour

I'm done with this deceitful, messed up society

I’m done with those who hate sobriety

I'd rather spend my days sleeping on the golden country fields and spend my nights walking the noisy city streets

I’ll get lost in the rock and roll, but no, I’ll pass on the stupid rap beats

So I am going to spend the remainder of my adolescent years, bingeing on chips and refusing to give

Watching pointless movies that I’ll probably never live

But hey, I’m just a teenager, we're hopeless anyway

Always scaring the s**t out of people, no matter what we say

Reviews

[Calibaster]

This is very well done, but ... in my opinion, ... it could have gone without the swearing. :) Keep up the good work!

[Vertigoingnowhere]

No the swearing kinda of burned the message in

[Calibaster]

Oh! OK, I get it now! it does kinda burn in the message. But I just thought I'd mention the fact that not all teenagers swear:)

[Vertigoingnowhere]

lol um, not to be offensive but lol a lot of them, its kind of like a right of passage or a right to in general

[Calibaster]

I guess you're right.:) but I don't.:)

[Vertigoingnowhere]

okay :)

[Calibaster]

Hahaha! sorry if I offended you. didn't mean to:)

[Annie]

I don't swear either :)

[Vertigoingnowhere]

well good for you guys! its hard to find pure people now a days

[Calibaster]

no kidding.

[Dearantlers]

I don't swear either

[Calibaster]

We should start a non-swearing group!!!

[quinfinn]

i am in love with this write. i love your message. i love the cadence. i love your rhyme scheme and i love your opinion of rap music! wonderful, absolutely wonderful!

[Vertigoingnowhere]

really? Yay :)