Mysterious Respect

She sat under the shade of an old oak tree. As she sits she wonders what will become of herself. At that moment she hears a sound come from inside the forrest. Her curiousity got the best of her and she decided to investigate. As she ventured into the woods she hears the noise again. It doesnt sound like anything she'd ever heard before, all she knew was it couldn't be human. It sounded like a moaning sound. As if something was in pain, or agony. then she came upon the source of the sound. It was a stange animal caught in a bear trap, but this was no bear. It had the wings of a dragon, the head of an eagle and the body of a lion. It was big and had emerald green eyes that just stared at her. She was a little hesitant to look into it's eyes but she got the feeling that she should't be afraid. She started to move closer to the creature, it didnt move. It was perfectly still as it watched her. She calmly and cafefully started to pry open the awful bear trap. She was finally able to set the animal free. It bowed its head as if to show respect. She turned around for just a split second to see if anyone was around to see what she had seen. No one was there. As she turned back around, just as the mysterious creature was lying there, it was gone.

Reviews

[catofjade]

I knew it, you're writing a book in terrific little segments, I just knew it! You go girl!

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It was a little SCARY at the begining but it turned out to be a great lovable story! 100/100 Loved it!

[Michael of Gilead]

This happened to me yesterday! well it wasn't a bear trap, it was the chicken wire around my garden...same creature though ;)

[Vertigoingnowhere]

lol thats funny

[eatmills]

Not bad. The story is understandable but alas the grammer and sentence structure does need some work. Keep trying though; you have the spark, just need the fire.

And happy Birth Month :)

[Rhianne Ney]

Ah... the past tenses are not present... well unless it's intended... anyway keep writing
Interesting *applause*

[Vertigoingnowhere]

wow thanks :)

[Vertigoingnowhere]

I Hope This Makes Your Day :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good story. Made me want to read more. Good description of the beast allow the reader have the vision of the amazing animal. I like the description of the help given and the quick disappearance of the beast. Thank you for the excellent story.
Coyote

[Vertigoingnowhere]

wow thanks :)