india

india

A Story by swiminmagic

In a farway dirt road of India, there lived a girl. A indian girl, and only 11 years young. Her name was Niece, she was a abosolutely kind girl, giving and caring were her habits she couldn't give rid of. This girl was perfect,almost. She was deformed, her features were awkardly disturbing and was said to live for another 5 years. Still this cheerful little chick had her hopes high. One day as she stumble across her backyard path, she saw ab weird little animal who was shot by a arrow. Quickly she reacted, she ran towards and grabbed it gently leaving nothing bloody on her hands, she held it closely and whipered " I'll take you to my papa, dont worry darling" the animal did not move it stayed there lying in her arms resting and frightless, somehow this animal felt comfortable wrap with her. As she turn around to lead on to her small little hut, she heard a crackle noise a souns someone would make if they step on a breakable twig. As a  reflex she swift her head to the side, making sure no contact was avaible. Suddenly she caught something, something deep in the bushes, a shadow unremarkable, maybe a human. She stared at it until it moved again. She was getting impacient she walked a little closer to the bushes moticing two feet under it, she finally spoke "come out,please". The boy stood there shivering with coldness and was feeling quite terrified dued to her deformility. " come out please,im begging" the boy took one step forward and thankfully another, "hi" was he first response he just stood there standing like a stiff stautue, but instead of all stonelike an perfect, he was chubby and had mud all over hes belly, and yes he was shirtless.  In his right hand was two arrows, in a heartbeat niece knew it was him " how could u" she snatched the two arrows right out of his hand and ran, protecting the weird creaure in her arms, with her path. The  boy was from a far distance now, he stood there confused and now looking at his bare left hand "wow" he said to himself. He went back into the bushes and took steps gently and at eased. slowly hes shadow diasppeared.

© 2009 swiminmagic


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swimmagic how could you take me on a rocket ride and at the apex of the journey drop me in to empty space. so many questions left unanswered, so many assumptions or subplots to explore. Just coldblooded to your reader why? Now I'll never know the rest of it for the rest of my life. We all lose at your lost of your words.






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Added on August 10, 2009

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swiminmagic
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toluca lake, CA



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