Where is the love?

Where is the love?

A Poem by swiminmagic
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we all know its missing.

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we threw him in prison, locked him in tight. made him suffer,gave him swears, and hate. closed the bars and threw the key away. He used to sit there and wait, for someone to come and realize and rescue him from this unknown place. Time went by, and he slowly aged, he came to upon death, and slowly died away. Hes name was love. No man, no human, no animal. Just a feeling that was once in our earth.

© 2009 swiminmagic


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Really great how you personified love, and made his fate so dreadful. Just one grammar error I thought I should point out:
"he came to upon death"
I think you meant to say he came upon death, or something to that effect.
Good job!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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swiminmagic
swiminmagic

toluca lake, CA



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Im a fantasy fanatic, I love escapism stories, another world kind of thing. more..

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