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Dead buds on these limbs to bring forth a malice spring
bleached blossoms become a whiter shade of guilty red
                made heavy from the owl that landed in broken flight
my invisible noose to hang the sun that frames thy head.



This "nothing" is a place of placid belief with stale breath
cold bark decays and renews, like the shedding of sin
             soft cries billow forth, from a widow that mourns her lover
an amnesia fills the sky; forgetting when and how to begin.



Esoteric branches that touch the hallowed questioning
a perch for the soulless that seek asylum from the storm
            the bow breaks, another cradle will rock.....watch it fall
land softly, rain shatters like glass, my blood is lukewarm.

Reviews

[Stacey Watts]

Nature and life's renewal. So beautiful the words you created here. I read the most beautiful things in your poetry. I find myself with this one just in awe. I have to agree with the others here, your imagery is always fantastic. I love the journey. Thank you.

[MOON]

This is poignant and lovely and yet the theme so deep. Love the word choice and how graphic the imagery is painted with your words.

[Moflo]

LOVE the imagery of this piece! Your descriptions are strong and very well worded. Very strong ending too, I like the second to last line.

[Sleeping Maiden]

Beautiful words!!! I love this. Your imagery is always sooo amazing...
Lovely! I love how you paint the picture with the words you write! =)

[An owl on the moon]

I don't know how you make such an agony of haunts seem so beautiful, but you do... There is the struggling life, trying to break forth from a cocoon, filled with merging and contrasting symbols... Your words play with a rhythmic, magical music that adds such a depth to life's imagery and mystery...

[Debbie_Philly]

Breath taking... the whole time I was reading it I was wide eyed at the beauty !!! its a Beautiful and again I have to say deep... you think deep... and I like that allot... again amazing !! Your use of words and imagery are spot on ... love it !!

[EMF]

Yep. Said I'd be back again. And it's still got the same effect. Still Damn Good

[Jeanmarie Flaherty]

See, I knew something "untitled" would be well worth the read. I love this piece, I love amnesia filling the sky and the last sigh here, your closing words, they couldn't be better. Beautiful, beautifully done

[Forest Green]

Vulture death trees; they condescend to life, especially when embodied by the plump visages of the birds of patient observation; watching for the final evidence of life to be extinguished.

Dark, foreboding them, adjacent to reality.

[Distant horizons]

Icouldnt possibly give this enough credit with a review as each line is thought provoking in its own right, so i shall not do the rest a disservice by picking a favourite as they are all equally superb and just say perfectly captured, written and expressed.

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Ummm...what the hell can I say? You do it much better than me...pouts