WhiTe NoiSe

Charged by emotions...both good and bad...I've learned to embrace it all.

WhiTe

NoiSe














         

This white noise
          it is the consequence of my instability
                                I watch in wonder
                                    as many specters rise from the unearthing
           It is time now
to harvest the fruit
                                possessed by sorcery and wonder
               let go of the restraints
                              for this ordained shepherdess; labors forth a monstrosity
                                                     another hum, I feel the thrum
                                 these birthing pains are never done.


****STATIC****


             At last
                                     this energy becomes alive
                    another tainted conception made sacred
             a thousand minutes of prayer and tribulation
       the rising blackness is now one
alive and without segregation
                                   it feeds quietly upon me
                                                 with an eager predation.


****STATIC****



                   I give in
                 dissolved by the spectrum of chaos
                                                 I'm now at peace with this beautiful desolation
    defiled and deaf
                 enlightened by the carnal knowledge
                        this confusion has been gifted
                                  by the feign
                                  that's shrouded within.

Author's Note

FYI: I want to thank all my friends for the love and support they have shown my daughter. It's because she's doing well with some new medications, that I'm finally allowed to visit my home here on WC. Much luv....thank you.

Reviews

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Hehe excuse me for a second when I saw the photo With the words white noise I thought That litlle was the poem hehe :) I find it incredible how you wrote this and even the format incredible! :) You have created a very well written and provoking Poem :) Enjoyed reading it :)

[UnderCompulsion]

Great poem.It makes me want to read it again and again.Beacuse of the writes like you I enjoy reading poetry. :)

[Vinyl Affair]

MIND F**K. Haha, well written and very tossy turvy, I enjoyed it very much. Keep up the good work.

[Eagle Cruagh]

'As Olla said, " I had to read this several times."
Your writing is the work of masters, you are
imbued with an understanding of the universe.
But, you are a MOM and as such you are beset
by the worries of the universe.
The White Noise are the friends and neighbors
prayers, they suffuse you , crowding out the
negatives, reestablishing your roots with your
daughter where the real value in living lies.
I pray that she i s fully recovered.
---- John

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Wow! This is Superb! You pull me into the White Noise.. The imagery of this piece is charged with energy that I can't explain... your pen is definitely electric! I love the last stanza.~ To give in, allows the peace to flow freely...when we are at the point of enlightenment. Amazing write!

[olla]

I had to read this several times.. well written..

[Dayran]

Facing up to an engaging the shadows of the mind. It brings to our revelation, ourselves, in all its many forms. Nice write!

[Jeremy Baker]

Agree with Chris, one of your finest. It can be cathartic to deal with our pain by creating art - and you have excelled here. The differing fonts and chilling images contrast with beautiful descriptions like being "at peace" with your desolation. Simply wonderful.

[BlueDreams]

Its a very great write Indeed... Appreciated your craft.. :-)

[Bare trees]

I'm glad to hear your daughter is doing better.

This reminds me of the ying and yang within. Life seems ordained to be made up of the good and the bad whether we like it or not. Nature consists of clear skies and storms. we are a reflection of that nature and your poem seems to acknowledge the acceptance of both as a part of life, of the mind, and as a part of the cycle that continues around us.