WhiTe NoiSe

Charged by emotions...both good and bad...I've learned to embrace it all.

WhiTe

NoiSe














         

This white noise
          it is the consequence of my instability
                                I watch in wonder
                                    as many specters rise from the unearthing
           It is time now
to harvest the fruit
                                possessed by sorcery and wonder
               let go of the restraints
                              for this ordained shepherdess; labors forth a monstrosity
                                                     another hum, I feel the thrum
                                 these birthing pains are never done.


****STATIC****


             At last
                                     this energy becomes alive
                    another tainted conception made sacred
             a thousand minutes of prayer and tribulation
       the rising blackness is now one
alive and without segregation
                                   it feeds quietly upon me
                                                 with an eager predation.


****STATIC****



                   I give in
                 dissolved by the spectrum of chaos
                                                 I'm now at peace with this beautiful desolation
    defiled and deaf
                 enlightened by the carnal knowledge
                        this confusion has been gifted
                                  by the feign
                                  that's shrouded within.

Author's Note

FYI: I want to thank all my friends for the love and support they have shown my daughter. It's because she's doing well with some new medications, that I'm finally allowed to visit my home here on WC. Much luv....thank you.

Reviews

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Hehe excuse me for a second when I saw the photo With the words white noise I thought That litlle was the poem hehe :) I find it incredible how you wrote this and even the format incredible! :) You have created a very well written and provoking Poem :) Enjoyed reading it :)

[Debbie_Philly]

WOW !! Penned beautifully...this piece speaks to me... I really enjoyed it !! :)

[Whiskurz]

Another beautiful piece from your talented pen.....Bravo my friend......Whisk

[MIB]

That was awesome, as usual. White noise is helpful if you have tinnitus, something I've lived with. The last part of this poem made me feel as if the person accepted their situation and then benefited from it :D well that's what I thought... great work ;)

[EMF]

Is it really months since I last read this? It seems like only yesterday. Probably because it made such an impact. Guess that means it's pretty damn good them.

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I just love the truth of your expression!

[Ryzo]

wow fantastic imagery and craft. I would like to also tell you your still life painting of yourself is very good. You have the gift of the arts young lady- use them to achieve your wildest dreams! :)

[Forest Green]

sometimes satisfaction comes in shreds of disappointment, yet life must be pursued into the most challenging corners of existence...sometimes.

soul-touching; genuine feeling saturates every line in true forensic emotion.

nicely penned..in potions of pain..

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. oh, i didn't know ... i'm glad she's doing better ... watching a loved one suffer is the greatest pain of all ... my mother was diagnosed with stage 3 cancer in december 2007 ... the active part of the treatment is over ... but the effect of that treatment ... especially the effect of chemotherapy is devastating ... she's in a bad shape ... but we fight it out together every day ... continuity is everything ... we don't mourn what goes wrong ... but take it as courageously as we can ... incidentally, she's hooked to WC ... shall read this post out to her soon ... i'm sure she'll connect with your words as intensely as i do ...

[AJ Kristiansen]

Splendid! Love it! :)