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It's the genesis of freedom that hides deep in my

mind. The words float across the parchment, and it pours

throughout the grain. All of this; it reads like a vapor,

splitting my lips in two.  As I speak, the narration cuts deep.  

Every vowel thickens my veins. Remarkable; how my ideas

begin to spill over. Baptized by inspiration, as the voracity

spills across an empty page. The syllables penetrate my changing

skin. I see it transpire; the letters fragmentalize.  Nouns, verbs,

and adjectives, bleeding a new passage with my fingertips.  I

trace the font that flirts Bookman Old Style, and Lucida Console.

There's a magic; a gravitational pull, my mortal embodiment

begins to whittle off.  Blending into the book that cradles

my ideas, dreams, and secrets. Falling away; an evaporation of

physical self.  The mystery that surrounds me, carries me

with an elegant lucidity.  I can finally rest my ghost,

                                                           

                                                                          upon

                                                              

                                                                                the

                                                                                

                                                                    EMPTY                        

                                                                         

                                                                               shelf.....

 

Author's Note

This is how I feel....when I can write. It becomes physical...spiritual.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the artwork and the strong words. Writing is my pleasure also. Take me away to better places and free me for a moment to wander in words and thoughts.
"The syllables penetrate my changing
skin. I see it transpire; the letters fragmentalize. Nouns, verbs,
and adjectives, bleeding a new passage with my fingertips. "
Powerful description made the poem a great pleasure to read.
Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Franky]

Well described! I've never quite felt that intensely about my own writing, but I'm pretty certain your writing is better anyway so....

I love the graphic you selected for this. Perfect!

[David Scott]

Your mind is an enjoyable land to visit! "I can finally rest my ghost, upon the EMPTY shelf...". This last line brought the whole write into focus for me. You painted in broad strokes and hinted around with religious and academic references. Then, you nailed it down to the shelf!
I like your early work very much. You seem less harsh and less cold somehow. Oh, don't get me wrong. I very much enjoy your "darker" work. I just like to see that hope and light are the sorce of your inspiration and that in their abscence you share the darkness we all must face. I hope you go back and read your own work. You really are inspirational.

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BRILLIANT!

[Amila Jay]

Ooh wow, can almost feel of the power of this write, excellent work:-)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Presentation can be just as important as the words when trying to express what you want through verse... we must put no limits on our creativity if we want to come off as real artists with meaning.

[screamin'ian]

I enjoyed it very much. Anything I have to say would echo the review left by EMF. Well done.

[MAC]

and it becomes brilliant!! just dig your style!

[roarke]

yeah, writing, or any artistic expressional form is not the process, it's the passion, the synthesis, the feeling, the letting go of the inside to dance, play, fight, love the outside and then the whole thing is set free and creation manifests....

lot's of people draw lines, sound pitches, tap words..... it's not the same.

I concur, well spoken.

[SkinlessFrank]

yeah....writing.....it's like the mind getting it on

[EMF]

Two months later and still an orgasmic mind ripper. To quallify. Orgasmic:- as in an experience that is so powerful as to overtake body and soul with such force as to change perception of the experiencee for a period of time and leaving them open to sensation at a heightened level. Mind ripper as in a work or concept of such quality that it burries its way deep into the consciousness and calls you back to it.
When work is as good as this, sometimes tit becomes necessary to visit and revisit it. To both enjoy it anew and to reevaluate your thoughts and feelings.
Personally I'm back here at least once a week. They don't get much better than this