Conjuring Spirits

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

THUMP...THUMP...THUMP.....taleeeee de tat!

 

Mystical voices permission the concussion

a seismic energy summoned within her rapture.

Invoking an archaic beat beneath her feet,

fire and sky are now freed spirits to conjure.

 

Possessed by compassion, intrigue, and myth,

she sashays around weightless within her trance.

Drums transpire like water filling her thirst,

fluid in her movements and prophetic dance.

 

Adorned with shadows of silver and gold,

she shimmers in moonstone and tourmaline.

Timely rhythm made flawless by her skirting,

in a feminine display of Goddess and shrine. 

 

Eyes closed she channels the spirits of old,

the feeling of serenity to make her forget.

A past whisper to cool the fire and swither,

she pauses to absorb the nights silhouette.

 

She's now without concept of dimension or self,

the beating drums now sedated and slow.

The air humms of wisdom that satiates her soul,

listen she does....for these voices from long ago.

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

THUMP...THUMP...THUMP.....taleeeee de tat!

the start of this...gives an added feel in your lines...and the stanzas after just put this verse into motion...and like the title says: Conjuring Spirits...and the photo give us a bit more with the imagery within this write...

[MIB]

This is an interesting one... I love the line 'fluid in her movements and prophetic dance' it sounds so enchanting for a spirt... excellent work again ;) keep it up ;)

[Natasha Ashway]

'fire and sky are now freed spirits to conjure.'

Fabulous, just fabulous.
Thanks for sharing this!

My darling, thank you, this is now at the moment exactly what I needed ... what a tribute, and a nice write beautiful words, I got the shivers all over... beautiful mysterious sentences, I was kidnapped, in your story, get away from misery, and sorrow, you always make me fly for a moment! thank you precious one! xo

[Reaching for the clouds]

Your use of despcriptive words is impressive. Do you just have just a great vocabulary or do you use a dictionary at the ready? Either way, the words are impressive. The idea is a bit sexy as well as mesmerizing.

The picture used is very appropriate.

I especially like how this piece makes a reader use their imagination.

[Antonio Valentino]

no matter whom this is dedicated to we are, all, under your spell.. and always will be..

beautiful Beth.

xo

[Blue Ivory]

Once again, whispering voices, lol! You're so good! With you, I just let myself get carried away by your words. Your poems are so beautiful! It for some reason reminds me of the tv series Supernatural. It's beautiful and heartfelt.

"drums transpire like water filling her thirst" was an unexpected and interesting metaphor. You've used appealing language. I like it.

[Cassie Fraga]

absolutely beautiful!!! creative in free verse, screaming of tender emotion.... I LOVED IT FAH REAL!!!
**tips my lyrical wand to you!!**

[Groovy]

a delightful, evocative piece of work. I think the images you share are vibrant and flow like a river

[Manpreet]

Vow! Lovely write.