Conjuring Spirits

Conjuring Spirits

A Poem by Muse

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 
 
THUMP...THUMP...THUMP.....taleeeee de tat!
 
Mystical voices permission the concussion
a seismic energy summoned within her rapture.
Invoking an archaic beat beneath her feet,
fire and sky are now freed spirits to conjure.
 
Possessed by compassion, intrigue, and myth,
she sashays around weightless within her trance.
Drums transpire like water filling her thirst,
fluid in her movements and prophetic dance.
 
Adorned with shadows of silver and gold,
she shimmers in moonstone and tourmaline.
Timely rhythm made flawless by her skirting,
in a feminine display of Goddess and shrine. 
 
Eyes closed she channels the spirits of old,
the feeling of serenity to make her forget.
A past whisper to cool the fire and swither,
she pauses to absorb the nights silhouette.
 
She's now without concept of dimension or self,
the beating drums now sedated and slow.
The air humms of wisdom that satiates her soul,
listen she does....for these voices from long ago.

© 2014 Muse


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THUMP...THUMP...THUMP.....taleeeee de tat!

the start of this...gives an added feel in your lines...and the stanzas after just put this verse into motion...and like the title says: Conjuring Spirits...and the photo give us a bit more with the imagery within this write...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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THUMP...THUMP...THUMP.....taleeeee de tat!

the start of this...gives an added feel in your lines...and the stanzas after just put this verse into motion...and like the title says: Conjuring Spirits...and the photo give us a bit more with the imagery within this write...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yes! Very good poetry I am beholding here.I hadn't realize you wrote so many poems. I thoroughly enjoyed this one mainly for its efficiency in summoning images. You employed an impeccable introduction to the piece in the first stanza, which you laced with precise and vivid wording: "mystical","seismic", "archaic". You managed to capture a feeling of ethereal abandon that I strive to define in some of my own poems. Great stuff!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Muse

11 Years Ago

thank you, and yes I have many poems....I've been writing for awhile. And once again, thank you.
Terrific images - I can see the spirits emerge. "Pausing to absorb the night's silhouette" is an amazing line in a beautiful poem!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Muse

11 Years Ago

thank you :))
I always let beautiful works consume me, mind and soul, because they always bring me to places, letting me see new faces. And this one is no different. It enthralls my gypsy heart:) Your words are wisps of freedom and is showing clever awareness of nature and its power. This is piece is ember-like.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Muse

11 Years Ago

I too read your gypsie inspired poem, I knew we were kindred spirits. ;)
Androglossia

11 Years Ago

That is without a doubt:)
Beautiful Work here TCL---indeed this satiates the Soul!!!
Voices from the past-at times speak in wisdom, sometimes in hurt, I block many in my head out, but Yours are always Heard--such fine works as these!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Muse

11 Years Ago

Thank you. :)
Souladareatease

11 Years Ago

Always=forevers in wherever our forms may be!!!
i wonder what they whisper . . .

Posted 11 Years Ago


Be careful! You casting that spell all over the place. I can def hear the drums. good to read you today!
Be well, dear Muse. :-)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This piece does feel so magical. Muse your writing is incredible! I love it, and I love the emotions you are invoking in the piece! Please never stop writing. You're quickly becoming an inspiration with every word of yours that I read. 100/100 for sure!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Well witchcraft does not work much on me (Aztec Blood) but i can see how this is more the spell binding, very Greek if i was to suggest an era.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Lily Mae

12 Years Ago

Mary Mother of Mercy who told you I was in that cheese porno? I'll be banished now for sure lol
Muse

12 Years Ago

Damn you all to hell
.....my face hurts now...signing off to get some pain medication. Lol...t.. read more
Lily Mae

12 Years Ago

xo
A Beautifully conjured tale.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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