Black Widow

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

      

  

 

 

 Masculine hands, with muscular limbs

 

                        tongue tied and beautifully hung, you  

 

                            fell victim to my selfish bliss, finally

 

                   trapped by my love that was woven and spun, I

 

         caught you within my web of silkened sheets

 

              held in bondage to be my dessert, your

 

                         martyred lips are mine alone to unravel, I'll

 

                         kiss it all better, never mind it might hurt

 

                                each gasp for breath shows your unrest

                    

                sorry my love for the tangled up mess

 

                            your chest cocooned within my embrace, its

 

                              pointless to fight the blackwidows fate, 

 

                    I'll eat you up slow.....

 

                  starting first, with your sweet decadent face.

 

Reviews

[EMF]

I have nothing against a little B&D. Even a little S&M. Willing to explore many other letters too, but this takes it to such a wonderfully new level... Oh. Yes. Sorry, I'm back and not behaving any more. You have created here a true lure, that keeps mine eye's returning again and again. Partly because of the sheer quality of it. The texture of the language has a silken sensuality and sexuality of it that holds you. And frankly, I'm turned on something rotten by it. As I said befoer..... way down to the marrow

[Dream Weaver]

My my my said the spider to the fly!
I really love this little composition :)

[M Garcia]

Excellent woven tale.

[Darksummerswind]

I love this poem because of it expresses beauty and darkness all at once. I also like the use of colors and the picture as well.

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. extremely vivid and expressive ...
. absolutely brilliantly written ...
. "fell victim to my selfish bliss" is absolutely unforgettable ...

[Tate Morgan]

Ohg I think this could be my ex wife lol She fits the story well

[R J Askew]

Brilliant, very erotic, dynamic and dramatic and there is a little visual joy to it all also. The beauty of the execution -- both poetic and sensual -- succeeds in making the menace seem like the sweeeeetest of poisons. We can alomost feel it chilling through our veins as we dye in the spider's power. But o how we love it so! The best line for me is 'your martyred lips are mine.'

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Love is perfect but humans aren't... We must take the good with the bad. It hurts so good. Love the metaphorical references.

[Liza]

ahhh; i love the imagery of a web; it is an attractive environment to be in if you're caught into with love; however equally offensive if we're not willing to be tangled exclusively

[VelvetRosetta]

Damn this was awesome... a true poisonous delight. I love how it was set up. It was even sensual with cruel undertones.
Loved it!!!!!

[Becky C Strukamp]

Loved the structure. Your poem, wow, so deliciously erotic. Excellent delivery.