Black Widow

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

      

  

 

 

 Masculine hands, with muscular limbs

 

                        tongue tied and beautifully hung, you  

 

                            fell victim to my selfish bliss, finally

 

                   trapped by my love that was woven and spun, I

 

         caught you within my web of silkened sheets

 

              held in bondage to be my dessert, your

 

                         martyred lips are mine alone to unravel, I'll

 

                         kiss it all better, never mind it might hurt

 

                                each gasp for breath shows your unrest

                    

                sorry my love for the tangled up mess

 

                            your chest cocooned within my embrace, its

 

                              pointless to fight the blackwidows fate, 

 

                    I'll eat you up slow.....

 

                  starting first, with your sweet decadent face.

 

Reviews

[EMF]

I have nothing against a little B&D. Even a little S&M. Willing to explore many other letters too, but this takes it to such a wonderfully new level... Oh. Yes. Sorry, I'm back and not behaving any more. You have created here a true lure, that keeps mine eye's returning again and again. Partly because of the sheer quality of it. The texture of the language has a silken sensuality and sexuality of it that holds you. And frankly, I'm turned on something rotten by it. As I said befoer..... way down to the marrow

[Kyle]

I am impressed by the multple meanings in your writing. You seem to interject evil, fear, and some sexuality into what you write.

Your pics are also very appropriate. You are GOOD at this.

[Antonio Valentino]

thats okay, i never liked my face much anyway... :)

Musey.. this was fantastic.. the web of sliken sheets.. brill!

hey if your spider ever needs a meaty flie, just holler.. i mean it'll hurt, sure..

but what a way to go.......

luved this!!
:)

[Revery]

So much delicious imagery in this poem. Very original, fresh and especially captivating. Like a pleasing moment it almost was done too fast, but not a criticism, as it makes it more potent by design. It results in making me wish I was the victim so the fantasy would continue on.

[Inyourshadow]

a web of silken sheets ~ love the use of bedlinen for the final resting place of ones intended victim, a blackwidows kiss is one not to be taken lightly and your poem shows the side of woman that truely makes them the more deadly of the species, maybe the praying mantis next time biting off his head ( ouch ) love the last 3 lines they say it all. Keep em' coming

[Judas Hammer]

I love the analogy and the metaphor, The beautiful spider woman....

[Coyote Poetry]

Those Black Widow woman would scare me. There are quite a few of them. I do like how you told the story. Old Grandfather told me. "Too good to be true. Probable ain't true." Complete poem was very good. I like the ending to the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Silent Serenity also kn..]

WOW now that's intense & kinda creepy since I fear spiders....but truly this is fantastic......the life of a black widow spider....she takes control over & spins her web of lust for anyone caught into her web is gone to his own fate! Terrific creation Muse! Enjoyed this one immensely! Kudos!!!

[Kaylor Mason]

This is really good. The story of a woman who knows her power over her man, and how to use him--and I've rarely seen that theme expressed as elegantlt as here, in this poem. Nice work!

[Megan]

I love this :) I love the passion here and the longing. It's nice to read something so tastefully written about romancing between the sheets. I really liked the black-widow concept, "devouring him", "selfish bliss" it's empowering..and somewhat sweet. This was a great write, and I shall definitely be reading more!

[Arthur Henn]

A black-widows symphony of loves last dance...