Black Widow

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

      

  

 

 

 Masculine hands, with muscular limbs

 

                        tongue tied and beautifully hung, you  

 

                            fell victim to my selfish bliss, finally

 

                   trapped by my love that was woven and spun, I

 

         caught you within my web of silkened sheets

 

              held in bondage to be my dessert, your

 

                         martyred lips are mine alone to unravel, I'll

 

                         kiss it all better, never mind it might hurt

 

                                each gasp for breath shows your unrest

                    

                sorry my love for the tangled up mess

 

                            your chest cocooned within my embrace, its

 

                              pointless to fight the blackwidows fate, 

 

                    I'll eat you up slow.....

 

                  starting first, with your sweet decadent face.

 

Reviews

[EMF]

I have nothing against a little B&D. Even a little S&M. Willing to explore many other letters too, but this takes it to such a wonderfully new level... Oh. Yes. Sorry, I'm back and not behaving any more. You have created here a true lure, that keeps mine eye's returning again and again. Partly because of the sheer quality of it. The texture of the language has a silken sensuality and sexuality of it that holds you. And frankly, I'm turned on something rotten by it. As I said befoer..... way down to the marrow

[Helrac]

"your martyred lips are mine alone to unravel" delightfully chilling use of language, playfull presentation, enchantingly sinister read. A black widow indeed, love it.

[A Red Red Rose 4 U Luv]

Wow... this is amazing!!!

[Susan]

Nice poem! I really like the word choice. You make me feel a lot of emotion while reading this. I really enjoyed it!

~Happy Writing!~

[Michael X]

artwork overlay in the presentation, that is literal silk to the words,
the dreamy vision a tempting, romantic movie in words. Stunning

[Eagle Cruagh]

It`s a very dirty job, but somebody has
to eat her mate.
I`m sure he enjoyed every bite, but then
she got him good--- the end.
You are so sweet, Muse. I just love your
romantic poems.
---- Eagle Cruagh

[Sarah]

strange but nice. Well Done.

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

Hurts so good...Nice!
Fantastic job of combining elements of pleasure and pain. Perfect cadence to this outstanding poem. "I'll eat you up slow...."
Favorited.

[Shy Girl]

Absolutely loved this poem. Just loved how you weaved the web. Used sheets and limbs, you the aggressor, him the unknowing victim. How you even had our eyes following the word structure. The way the lines wove down the page. Accented words to draw us all into your web...magnificant. I loved this so much. Thank you for showing us all this stunning piece. :)

[EMF]

Ohh. So deliciously dark and disturbed. An exploration of destructive sensual sexuality. Wonderful, all the way down to the marrow.

[Tina Kline]

A very sinister, dark and seductive poem. Sweet temptation that leads to ultimate destruction. Sometimes the juicy fruit is too bitter. Very impressive write.