Black Widow

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

      

  

 

 

 Masculine hands, with muscular limbs

 

                        tongue tied and beautifully hung, you  

 

                            fell victim to my selfish bliss, finally

 

                   trapped by my love that was woven and spun, I

 

         caught you within my web of silkened sheets

 

              held in bondage to be my dessert, your

 

                         martyred lips are mine alone to unravel, I'll

 

                         kiss it all better, never mind it might hurt

 

                                each gasp for breath shows your unrest

                    

                sorry my love for the tangled up mess

 

                            your chest cocooned within my embrace, its

 

                              pointless to fight the blackwidows fate, 

 

                    I'll eat you up slow.....

 

                  starting first, with your sweet decadent face.

 

Reviews

[EMF]

I have nothing against a little B&D. Even a little S&M. Willing to explore many other letters too, but this takes it to such a wonderfully new level... Oh. Yes. Sorry, I'm back and not behaving any more. You have created here a true lure, that keeps mine eye's returning again and again. Partly because of the sheer quality of it. The texture of the language has a silken sensuality and sexuality of it that holds you. And frankly, I'm turned on something rotten by it. As I said befoer..... way down to the marrow

[Λsylum Ƣo&#..]

Muse~ in a word - superb . . . love the symbolism, love the words!

[Baby Ricochet]

great imagery

[poeticpiers]

Do I detect a note of misogyny? a fear of intimacy.

[Rasputin]

I've never wanted so badly to be eaten alive by a spider.

[Alicia Schroeder]

Very creative write.. and a great read :)

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Lights a cigarette! That was delicious :)

[Rusty]

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[Southern Cross]

Perfectly woven ..like your web. Enticing and luring is all part of our sexuality.

[Droll Prole]

I loved reading this, much sexier than that old tori amos song.

[MoriartyMesa]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cG0qv9s0VNo


I am sure I do not need to go into further explanation. The guitar, smell of tequila, cigs, sweat. Should be more than reason enough.