Black Widow

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

      

  

 

 

 Masculine hands, with muscular limbs

 

                        tongue tied and beautifully hung, you  

 

                            fell victim to my selfish bliss, finally

 

                   trapped by my love that was woven and spun, I

 

         caught you within my web of silkened sheets

 

              held in bondage to be my dessert, your

 

                         martyred lips are mine alone to unravel, I'll

 

                         kiss it all better, never mind it might hurt

 

                                each gasp for breath shows your unrest

                    

                sorry my love for the tangled up mess

 

                            your chest cocooned within my embrace, its

 

                              pointless to fight the blackwidows fate, 

 

                    I'll eat you up slow.....

 

                  starting first, with your sweet decadent face.

 

Reviews

[EMF]

I have nothing against a little B&D. Even a little S&M. Willing to explore many other letters too, but this takes it to such a wonderfully new level... Oh. Yes. Sorry, I'm back and not behaving any more. You have created here a true lure, that keeps mine eye's returning again and again. Partly because of the sheer quality of it. The texture of the language has a silken sensuality and sexuality of it that holds you. And frankly, I'm turned on something rotten by it. As I said befoer..... way down to the marrow

[Viper]

wow! makes one willing to be a victim.....

This was clever and very enjoyable to read!

[Vinod Kumar U K]

At last tottaly disolved in the body and soul, the old concept never changes, Nice poem.......

[DreyaArt]

well written, left me with shivers, thank you so much for writing :)

[KimLove "The Beautiful ..]

I absolutly love this in so many ways. You have taken something sadistic and made it sensureal. The imagery superb as if you are watching it all unravel in front of you.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Sexual and almost erratic to the senses, the imagery drives in the seat of the mind, well done

[Rene Velez]

great imagery and sensual domination....

[light and ashes]

This poem is sexy and scary combined. The man is so entangled in her web that there is no chance that he will be able break free and avoid her bite! Not sure if he would even want to or not, such an awesome write.

[Kenneth The Poet]

Just a beautiful, almost flesh-crawling piece of work. I now fear the spider greatly.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Evil and sooooooooooo wonderful!