Forcasting Rain...........................

Forcasting Rain...........................

A Poem by Muse

 
Hold my umbrella, keep
their words off my head
protect me
from this
cold
hard
acidic rain
as the ridicule falls
it drowns me
with arthritic pain.
 
Can I stand behind you
to hide my face
I cannot show them my light
they might blow it out
making my day 
a darker night.
 
Speak for me please
my mouth cannot open
but I hear their whispers
every word
seams to shrink me smaller
pull me back up
I need your help
to stand a little taller.

© 2014 Muse


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This is an extraordinary write, very deep and personal...someplace in time I think we've all visited at one time or another. We become numb to if we're lucky, then there are those currents of despair that rain upon our soul so wounding. Captivating read.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Yes but first it drives us insane! ;-)
Muse

11 Years Ago

I have underestimated the emotional scars..my gawd...after conversing with you briefly..I had to sit.. read more
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Sorry, didn't mean to open old wounds. xo



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Once again you use your unique talent to shed light on small-minded people who look for reasons to attack another. Do not let anyone dim the light from your candle or alter your voice to make it sound weak. Continue to be a light beaming out from your lighthouse shedding light on the malevolent who would shrink you. Shout out! You have many hands and hearts pulling you up. Stand tall!

Excellent revelation of your inner fear and sadness. Beautiful writing, Muse.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Another amazing poem very descriptive and captivating!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Awesome writing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


incredible

Posted 13 Years Ago


the poem is incredible! and i really like the title you chose, its very different.

Posted 13 Years Ago


awesome poem,
i like the rhymes throughout it also!

Posted 13 Years Ago


We all need to take for those that are being put down and bullied. This poem is a cry demanding pleading for action. Fantastic!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


A prized and stagnant subject, but you breath life into the new, well done, great read.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on July 1, 2011
Last Updated on June 24, 2014
Tags: life, self-confidence, weather, rain, story, poetry, poem, love, companionship, struggles

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