Drink Her

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Fair Goddess

hands stretched out

limbs wide open

honeysuckle vines

drink her

 

Crystalline glass

she'll fill it full

the intoxication

quenching a thirst

drink her

 

Fair Woman

a tree of life

dripping with rain

mouth wide open

drink her

 

Coil with her

vessel of breath

drunkenness

aperture open

drink her

 

 

 

Reviews

[Sheila Kline]

To drink of life is to imbibe in the good with the bad - dripping with rain, when the earth is parched and one needs to be rejuvenated. To spend enough time to soak it all in, leaves one tired, almost drunken with the experience but it is then we are able to partake of the fullness of living - we must be totally spent out to fully appreciate the value of that which is so freely given!
Full of sensuality and LIFE!!

[Reaching for the clouds]

There is a darkness to this. I feel that the picture adds to this reading experience greatly. Then the danger comes in too and it makes your readers really think about the meaning. Nice.

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ooh..I love the subtleties which reflect with the words..the veiled metaphors and gorgeous descriptive verse..wonderful

[Priscilla Sayers]

Subtle and sultry... with a hint of danger. A taunting to drink her but what will the drunkness from her elixir bring? I love it.

[Me]

Cleverly crafted poem.

[joshua deathdealer]

Ha ha...Well you know I love this. Great flow and imagery...xx

[Wildfleour]

A super sexy elixir of words.

[Antonio Valentino]

what a gorgeous e liks her

what a gorgeous poem

what a gorgeous,

soul.


I pray I drown in such a succulent nectar!

xo

:)

[Lily Mae]

I love this..the earth the ..and the.. and the poem was perfect ;) xo

[EMF]

Alright. So I came back here for another read before I shut this thing down and get on with some sleeping. Still grinning