Drink Her

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Fair Goddess

hands stretched out

limbs wide open

honeysuckle vines

drink her

 

Crystalline glass

she'll fill it full

the intoxication

quenching a thirst

drink her

 

Fair Woman

a tree of life

dripping with rain

mouth wide open

drink her

 

Coil with her

vessel of breath

drunkenness

aperture open

drink her

 

 

 

Reviews

[Sheila Kline]

To drink of life is to imbibe in the good with the bad - dripping with rain, when the earth is parched and one needs to be rejuvenated. To spend enough time to soak it all in, leaves one tired, almost drunken with the experience but it is then we are able to partake of the fullness of living - we must be totally spent out to fully appreciate the value of that which is so freely given!
Full of sensuality and LIFE!!

[Francis V]

i love those sensual subtleties you insinuate! It keeps a reader enthralled and clinging to the next feast for the thought. Very well done! i'm impressed.

[kublakhan27]

I really like this one, especially the last verse...I've actually read a bunch of your stuff and I've loved most of it...I haven't really left any comments just cuz you've already gotten so many and there isn't much else I can add review-wise^^

[Muse]

well..a lot of comments just adds to my ego. so thank you. lol

[kublakhan27]

lol no problem^^

[John Alexander McFadyen]

It does, as a previous review suggests, have meaning but this is so sexy!!!!!!

[sienikeha]

lovely!
.i love that image - it was my desktop for awhile. beauty.

[MIB]

Interesting and original... I liked it, but I think this one is a bit like marmite.. love/hate. keep up the good work :D

[Rusty]

Drink, Drank, Drunk.

[Clockwork]

I like how you compare the woman to the tree of life. The use of the word aperture added a distinct flavor to that idea as well. For me it give the poem and the woman it centers around a rather luminous aura which we are able to drink and thus trace the tributaries of many generations back into time.

[Circe]

such raw and vivid feminine imagery, as if to compel you to take all that mother nature is offering, drinking the power of the goddess, surrendering to the temptation, to taste all that is wild and passionate and awaken such feelings in yourself, a request that cannot be denied.

[ZeeArsonist]

i enjoy the way you craft such a visual language. My favorite "aperture open, drink her" I want to read more. :)

[Natasha Ashway]

Perfection, Muse.
These words are a tide, directed by a moon in strong bloom.
You hold us wondering and transfixed, musing these powerful life giving portraits of emotion...
This piece was meant to be. Maybe I'm just obsessed with goddesses...
But, wow!