Drink Her

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Fair Goddess

hands stretched out

limbs wide open

honeysuckle vines

drink her

 

Crystalline glass

she'll fill it full

the intoxication

quenching a thirst

drink her

 

Fair Woman

a tree of life

dripping with rain

mouth wide open

drink her

 

Coil with her

vessel of breath

drunkenness

aperture open

drink her

 

 

 

Reviews

[Sheila Kline]

To drink of life is to imbibe in the good with the bad - dripping with rain, when the earth is parched and one needs to be rejuvenated. To spend enough time to soak it all in, leaves one tired, almost drunken with the experience but it is then we are able to partake of the fullness of living - we must be totally spent out to fully appreciate the value of that which is so freely given!
Full of sensuality and LIFE!!

[Everett DeValle]

I have drank from this cup, many times, and I must say it is delicious. I Drink, therefore I am.

Lovely write, Muse....wonderful emotions expressed. :)

[Nona]

Amazing poem! So rich imagery with fantastic allusions and tasty metaphors! Genius work!

[Nautili]

I love it. You captured the cup filled with passion's nectar so beautifully. I love the picture-beautiful analogy for a woman-a tree that one can get shelter and shade from, one where birds can nest, and buds flower. Drink her, inhale her, for she is truly a gift.For all men to truly see this!!!!

[Pax Analog]

Elixir of divine passion, yum! Your poem's concise & the essence of desire & communion. One drinks it straight, no chaser. Ahhhh. . .

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Well there is no chance for her to dry out at this stage is there? Interesting use of language while physically and conceptually thirst inducing...nice writing.

[David Scott]

Such a natural picture of sensual ecstasy! I think I might be thirsty myself after that one!
Loved it! Did not know if you were sharing this side of your artistry. It was evident even in the darker work but here it is more... "innocent".
:-)
Cheers!

[Samuel Dickens]

Outstanding! You have a lean style that is most appealing. A relative few carefully chosen and placed words, they really pack a wallop. The painting is just amazing, too.

[Muse]

lol...I thought I wrote too metaphorical for you. Just kidding. Yes this is fantasy...yet the words are precise...descriptive and simple. The message couldn't be more clear. Love is the elixir of life.

[Samuel Dickens]

Yes, a lot of poetry around here gives me problems, but this one seemed quite clear.

[Muse]

well if my writing ever makes you constipated again, please tell me. Maybe I need to reevalute. lol...sorry..some Muse humor.

[Manda]

wow! you writing is incredible! very descriptive and clear to the reader! Well done again.

[Arthur Henn]

"Fair Goddess" - My crystalline blue glass sky cover of four seasons encompass the outer bark covering of bast which covers a thin layer of cambium, cambium's sheet to protect the heart's soul of sapwood nourishing roots and leaves... You drink of my seasons till intoxication overflows my wants to rain down on you...

Bast - (botany) tissue that conducts synthesized food substances (e.g., from leaves) to parts where needed; consists primarily of sieve tubes

Cambium - A formative one-cell layer of tissue between xylem and phloem in most vascular plants that is responsible for secondary growth

Sapwood - Newly formed outer wood lying between the cambium and the heartwood of a tree or woody plant; usually light colored; active in water conduction

I have no idea where I'm going with this review... Better stop there... lol

But your words of talent is an aperture of heart and soul, a "Vessel of breath" to drink of your words...

The photo you used moved the ground I walk on...

[Baby Ricochet]

WOW! The photo's great too.