Drink Her
A Poem by Muse
Fair Goddess
hands stretched out
limbs wide open
honeysuckle vines
drink her
Crystalline glass
she'll fill it full
the intoxication
quenching a thirst
drink her
Fair Woman
a tree of life
dripping with rain
mouth wide open
drink her
Coil with her
vessel of breath
drunkenness
aperture open
drink her
© 2014 Muse
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To drink of life is to imbibe in the good with the bad - dripping with rain, when the earth is parched and one needs to be rejuvenated. To spend enough time to soak it all in, leaves one tired, almost drunken with the experience but it is then we are able to partake of the fullness of living - we must be totally spent out to fully appreciate the value of that which is so freely given!
Full of sensuality and LIFE!!
Posted 10 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
lol...I thought I wrote too metaphorical for you. Just kidding. Yes this is fantasy...yet the word.. read morelol...I thought I wrote too metaphorical for you. Just kidding. Yes this is fantasy...yet the words are precise...descriptive and simple. The message couldn't be more clear. Love is the elixir of life.
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12 Years Ago
Yes, a lot of poetry around here gives me problems, but this one seemed quite clear.
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12 Years Ago
well if my writing ever makes you constipated again, please tell me. Maybe I need to reevalute. lol... read morewell if my writing ever makes you constipated again, please tell me. Maybe I need to reevalute. lol...sorry..some Muse humor.
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Added on May 26, 2011
Last Updated on June 8, 2014
Tags: lust, love, poem, poetry, life
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