Drink Her

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Fair Goddess

hands stretched out

limbs wide open

honeysuckle vines

drink her

 

Crystalline glass

she'll fill it full

the intoxication

quenching a thirst

drink her

 

Fair Woman

a tree of life

dripping with rain

mouth wide open

drink her

 

Coil with her

vessel of breath

drunkenness

aperture open

drink her

 

 

 

Reviews

[Sheila Kline]

To drink of life is to imbibe in the good with the bad - dripping with rain, when the earth is parched and one needs to be rejuvenated. To spend enough time to soak it all in, leaves one tired, almost drunken with the experience but it is then we are able to partake of the fullness of living - we must be totally spent out to fully appreciate the value of that which is so freely given!
Full of sensuality and LIFE!!

[Mark]

Sensually spoken as iF by a women versed in the Wise ways of olde...nicely done, makes one parched...

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

I like the primal element of this, I had such an experience with my last 'love'. The kind of attraction that broke all barriers and expectations.

[creativequill]

incredible words, loved the second and third stanzas the most, sensual and intoxicating in the way it reads, heavy and full of desire, great job

[Muse]

thank you...

[creativequill]

always

[Rob Santana]

Your choice of words are excellent. Smooth flowing piece. I like this poem alot. Don't know why but this poem reminds me of a song called "Love between a boy and girl " by The temprees

[Muse]

This is the one and only poem written inspired by song:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JYUrak2sBCI

so it makes sense that you think of music...cause music inspired me.

[Muse]

Sorry forgot to tell you the name of it Tori Amos "Lust"

[Rob Santana]

Cool I'm gonna check it out thanks Muse.

[BL]

I feel the erotic magic of nature and plentiful Mother Earth coming through in simple but exquisite lay written poem.

[Inda]

Perfect in every way, this is poetry at it's best!
Great piece!

[Muse]

awe..thank you!

[realmwriter]

This is very good, infact it kinda turns me on...!

[Muse]

lol I try.

[realmwriter]

Nay, Yiou succeed

[quinfinn]

thirst inducing and passionate to a fault, very nicely played.

[Muse]

thank you...

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Deeply sensual and tenderly written. Lovely writing!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

passionately personal in its elaborate ecstacy---

"aperture open/ drink her"

the real sensuality is to quench each other's thirst, to drink each other in.

the tree of carnal knowledge...

nice poem

jacob