Drink Her

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Fair Goddess

hands stretched out

limbs wide open

honeysuckle vines

drink her

 

Crystalline glass

she'll fill it full

the intoxication

quenching a thirst

drink her

 

Fair Woman

a tree of life

dripping with rain

mouth wide open

drink her

 

Coil with her

vessel of breath

drunkenness

aperture open

drink her

 

 

 

Reviews

[Sheila Kline]

To drink of life is to imbibe in the good with the bad - dripping with rain, when the earth is parched and one needs to be rejuvenated. To spend enough time to soak it all in, leaves one tired, almost drunken with the experience but it is then we are able to partake of the fullness of living - we must be totally spent out to fully appreciate the value of that which is so freely given!
Full of sensuality and LIFE!!

[Rossen]

Tempting goblet of passion ~ seductive way about you Muse...




Rossen's thumbs up

[Bare Bohemian]

Why am I thirsty all of a sudden?

[light and ashes]

Gorgeous short poem. Hot, passionate, elegant, and very imaginative. Fantastic and superb!!!

[roy mccarthy]

beautiful write!

[Liza]

sensual sweet and tension building - just longing - desire for the tree of life and touch

[Judas Hammer]

nice! I'm thirsty for this woman.....

[Dream Weaver]

Aesthetically prolific with sensuous
metaphoric luminosity, in other words
very hot... :)

[Allen Smuckler]

Dripping with sensuality and passion...
well done, Muse
allen

[Kyle]

Very sweet!. And very nice.

[Christie Moses]

i found this so uniquely sensual. I love the journey it took me in my mind. Awesome writing.