Drink Her

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Fair Goddess

hands stretched out

limbs wide open

honeysuckle vines

drink her

 

Crystalline glass

she'll fill it full

the intoxication

quenching a thirst

drink her

 

Fair Woman

a tree of life

dripping with rain

mouth wide open

drink her

 

Coil with her

vessel of breath

drunkenness

aperture open

drink her

 

 

 

Reviews

[Sheila Kline]

To drink of life is to imbibe in the good with the bad - dripping with rain, when the earth is parched and one needs to be rejuvenated. To spend enough time to soak it all in, leaves one tired, almost drunken with the experience but it is then we are able to partake of the fullness of living - we must be totally spent out to fully appreciate the value of that which is so freely given!
Full of sensuality and LIFE!!

[H.L. Cerveise]

Love it very much. It painted such erotic pictures in my mind. Thanks for sharing it.

[Willys Watson]

I really love this. Like with your other verse you are a master of image, in gift in itself enhanced by an expanded vocabulary that allows you considerable poetic freedom.

[Steven]

I kept wanting to read a vampire line or two, maybe a little blood, which would be quite you, but that's alright. It's great. Sexual, and somehow neat. At least, I don't picture him spilling a drop.

[Anand Sehgal]

eroticism blended with sense of art. Loved the write dear :)
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[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

For a minute I thought you were speaking of a woman.


Very Elegant and beautiful thank you for sharing.


Blessings. Kindred poet

[An owl on the moon]

The music here just seems to crescendo as your words strike sensual and strong. Beautiful and mythic, with a powerful voice. Missing you, Muse...

[Dye]

What a sensually alluring read. Each stanza as beautiful as the next.

[shallimarRose]

I have this picture in my files.. I have always loved it. You have done it justice with your subtle erotica.. Enjoyed. shallimarRose

[Neville]

what a wholesome and elsewise titilating work which clearly demonstrates just how multifaceted you are. I am spitting feathers here and need to quentch this thirst

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