Tomorrow at Two

A saucy little tonge twister..........................

Tomorrow at two, together we'll share

 our lustful tendencies

Tender, tempestuous and tantalizing kisses

To finally taste you, time and time again with

the tickle of my tongue

Your tingling 'touches' taunt and beckon
to my desire

Tis a tedious task, to explore

this tenacious taboo

Tomorrow at two, a tumultuous thirst

shall be quenched!

Reviews

[Richard🖌]

Gosh, Dear Beth!
What a delightfully sensual romp of impending sensations your deftly intriguing scintillations of suggestive sweetness slathers our senses with … I, for one, am smitten by your spell, can't you tell as my passions swell?
Sweet picture, too, and it's a date, so don't be late, I'll pick you up and we'll consummate! ; )
I dearly love it, Beth, my favorite line:
"Tis a tedious task, to explore
this tenacious taboo" … ummm!
Got a suggestion for you to make this already amazingly rendered piece just a hair sweeter.
Without changing your count, but adding smoother punch, make it:
"Your tingling 'touches' taunt and beckon
to my desire"

Okay, I'm ducking … LOL!
You really got it going on … you so saucy-good, and sooo naughty! ⁓ Richard ; )

[Muse]

Grammar and spelling are not a strong point of mine. I rather suck at it actually. I try to fake it, but you still caught me in the act. Correction appreciated, it has been noted and fully utilized. ;)

[Richard🖌]

Well, Beth dear,
Great correction, but what about my review,you didn't like it, or what? LOL!

[Muse]

My loss of words prove that my efforts are futile. In other words. I'm not worthy of your charms or talent. Even my efforts to write an Alliterative poem failed. I want to write something clever, but this damn writers block has me feeling worse than tongue tied. I feel numb dumb and hum-drum. Your review was delightful, it was better than the actual poem I wrote! ha ha ha

[Cassie Fraga]

mmmmhhhmmm.... makes me wanna watch my clock for tomorrow at two... ahhaha!!
HOTNESS right here!! cheeeeyea... great read!!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

My tongue is twisted from this talented poetic word play! Crafted perfectly!!

[Eagle Cruagh]

Tomorrow at two we must have tea
Or maybe just you and me
two t***y two tum, think that was
the way the song sung.
Incredible versatility...
Thanks for the twist tongue tip.
----- John

Thou is thoughtful, thinking, tenderly topicly teriffic!!!!!! my word play queen! Lovely work! I keep on reading for another 10 rounds :D

[EMF]

I laughed out loud at the deliscious joy at reading this out load. It took me three attempts. A wonderfully playfuly daliance that can't help but make you feel good, and just a little warm. Wonderful playing with words that leaves you fascinated and awed.

[Kenneth The Poet]

Like Cosmo's Hot Tips...in Victorian form.

[Moflo]

Word choice is excellent here! Shows off your true ability as a poet, Muse! Great work!

[InkSlinger]

Tomorrow at two, together we'll share our lustful tendencies...
Thursday at three would be better for me...

Thank you for twisting my tongue, and leaving me wanting more!
Well done!

[Larry Dyson]

"Weekend in Paris "comes to mind...interesting use of "tedious"...takes a new meaning in this context.

[R J Askew]

Great opening lines, full of wicked promise. It brings to mind the film DANGEROUS LIASONS. Can hear John Malkovic reading this one, his voice dripping with playful mischief.