Tomorrow at Two

A saucy little tonge twister..........................

Tomorrow at two, together we'll share

 our lustful tendencies

Tender, tempestuous and tantalizing kisses

To finally taste you, time and time again with

the tickle of my tongue

Your tingling 'touches' taunt and beckon
to my desire

Tis a tedious task, to explore

this tenacious taboo

Tomorrow at two, a tumultuous thirst

shall be quenched!

Reviews

[Richard🖌]

Gosh, Dear Beth!
What a delightfully sensual romp of impending sensations your deftly intriguing scintillations of suggestive sweetness slathers our senses with … I, for one, am smitten by your spell, can't you tell as my passions swell?
Sweet picture, too, and it's a date, so don't be late, I'll pick you up and we'll consummate! ; )
I dearly love it, Beth, my favorite line:
"Tis a tedious task, to explore
this tenacious taboo" … ummm!
Got a suggestion for you to make this already amazingly rendered piece just a hair sweeter.
Without changing your count, but adding smoother punch, make it:
"Your tingling 'touches' taunt and beckon
to my desire"

Okay, I'm ducking … LOL!
You really got it going on … you so saucy-good, and sooo naughty! ⁓ Richard ; )

[Muse]

Grammar and spelling are not a strong point of mine. I rather suck at it actually. I try to fake it, but you still caught me in the act. Correction appreciated, it has been noted and fully utilized. ;)

[Richard🖌]

Well, Beth dear,
Great correction, but what about my review,you didn't like it, or what? LOL!

[Muse]

My loss of words prove that my efforts are futile. In other words. I'm not worthy of your charms or talent. Even my efforts to write an Alliterative poem failed. I want to write something clever, but this damn writers block has me feeling worse than tongue tied. I feel numb dumb and hum-drum. Your review was delightful, it was better than the actual poem I wrote! ha ha ha

[Jeremy Baker]

Very sensual, warm and inviting. One of my favourites for sure!

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alliteration at it's saucy best!!!

[An owl on the moon]

Your words dance over hearts and minds and soft warm skin... There is a celebration of sensuality, one that grows with the passion of anticipation... just the longing for your lover can heighten all sensations of the world... Powerfully rich... Someone got a big gulp at two!

[Manda]

thought provoking, subtly sexy, and simply delightful..

[SkinlessFrank]

tafternoon telight?

[Amila Jay]

An interesting poem, 'tis a tedious task' - cool, LOL, love the write:-)

[Xhiljola]

As always..it's is great! wonderful writer

[Alessander]

at two? a nooner or bootycall lol

ta-ta.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Totally titillating and tremendously tingling.

[Kelly Scheppers]

If you believe "in theater for the eyes", all this needs is an ovation! The passion and play of words are in brilliant symmetry.

Applause!