Tomorrow at Two

A saucy little tonge twister..........................

Tomorrow at two, together we'll share

 our lustful tendencies

Tender, tempestuous and tantalizing kisses

To finally taste you, time and time again with

the tickle of my tongue

Your tingling 'touches' taunt and beckon
to my desire

Tis a tedious task, to explore

this tenacious taboo

Tomorrow at two, a tumultuous thirst

shall be quenched!

Reviews

[Richard🖌]

Gosh, Dear Beth!
What a delightfully sensual romp of impending sensations your deftly intriguing scintillations of suggestive sweetness slathers our senses with … I, for one, am smitten by your spell, can't you tell as my passions swell?
Sweet picture, too, and it's a date, so don't be late, I'll pick you up and we'll consummate! ; )
I dearly love it, Beth, my favorite line:
"Tis a tedious task, to explore
this tenacious taboo" … ummm!
Got a suggestion for you to make this already amazingly rendered piece just a hair sweeter.
Without changing your count, but adding smoother punch, make it:
"Your tingling 'touches' taunt and beckon
to my desire"

Okay, I'm ducking … LOL!
You really got it going on … you so saucy-good, and sooo naughty! ⁓ Richard ; )

[Muse]

Grammar and spelling are not a strong point of mine. I rather suck at it actually. I try to fake it, but you still caught me in the act. Correction appreciated, it has been noted and fully utilized. ;)

[Richard🖌]

Well, Beth dear,
Great correction, but what about my review,you didn't like it, or what? LOL!

[Muse]

My loss of words prove that my efforts are futile. In other words. I'm not worthy of your charms or talent. Even my efforts to write an Alliterative poem failed. I want to write something clever, but this damn writers block has me feeling worse than tongue tied. I feel numb dumb and hum-drum. Your review was delightful, it was better than the actual poem I wrote! ha ha ha

[Pól]

Is that 2 ur time or my time. Would hate to keep u waiting!!

[Scott Metro]

smiled...then smiled again....

[David Scott]

Afternoon delight! I can hardly wait... ha. I wonder what poem will spawn from this trist? Well, it could go any number of ways. I hoping for the happiest of endings. :)
Fun little read.

[Mockingbird]

i like the alliteration in this piece. it lightens the mood of the forbidden tryst, a taboo. and it must take place at two when they can get away from their normal everyday lives.despite the levity of it, it doesn't take away the subtlety of the erotica.

[#33]

How about today at two?

[Mic]

Alliteration is the most pleasing hum in verse to that little ear in my mind.

'Tomorrow at two...'

Loved it!

[Art Sun]

a small tongue twister with a bit of exotic sensuality...nice work

[Muse]

my first attempt at an alliteration...but I think I broke a few rules. Better luck next time..

[Art Sun]

aren't they supposed to be broken?

[Muse]

depends on who you ask.

[Art Sun]

:) o yea?

[Muse]

I've had my writings bashed for not being technical. There are some that think anything outside structured poetry...is just plain WRONG.

[Art Sun]

OH....so that's where Tinker Bell came from...

[Muse]

yeah they said they didn't believe in fairies...so she choked and died. :(

[MIB]

Very nicely done, it is a bit tongue twisting, but the words make it so worth while. Funny I started reading this and looked at the clock, I wonder how many other people did... wish it was two o'clock now... lol Keep up the great work :D

[Blue Ivory]

This poem made me realize I need to practice tongue twisters lol! So many Ts! The choice of words is great. They paint a picture in my mind of teasing flirting. Reminds me of my old crush :P