yes, this is a brain on crack---or more evident, a crack in the brain that hates...
we are all eggs in the same box, all have shells, some white, some brown , some whatever, but inside
the yokes are the same...
I love this piece, Muse.
I am happy to see more writings being composed that face the issue head on...and for what it is.
Just plain stupid ...
j.
Posted 4 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
4 Years Ago
Thank you Jacob. I think most of you probably know what I'm feeling and what I really want to say. T.. read moreThank you Jacob. I think most of you probably know what I'm feeling and what I really want to say. To stay politically correct, I must share my feelings with a slight hand and keep my vision subjective. I fear if I don't, I may be hanged on for treason. Stupid is as stupid does.
Sometimes life is frustrating and causes anger to form crawling under the skin
Posted 3 Years Ago
3 Years Ago
Not anger. I'm frustrated with people conforming to the new world order bs. End of story.
3 Years Ago
I definitely agree. I try not to watch too much of the news because it is repetitive and almost alwa.. read moreI definitely agree. I try not to watch too much of the news because it is repetitive and almost always negative.
Being small is the greatest hiding place ever! What incredible language you've used.. truth said in miniature and consequently, echoing here, there and everywhere. You've always had a special gift.. thank you.
Oh yesssss! This is what I crave! Poetry that shakes the cobwebs from my old bored cranium. I love it. Shake it up & serve some thought-provocation! Even tho I love this, it occurs to me that there are many in my circle of friends who would take offense, as if you are advocating violence or tyranny. People are so damn trigger-sensitive these days! They can't explore a figurative splash on the page like this without throwing in a heavy dose of judgment & taking things personally. Sorry I'm going off . . . which, to me, is the delightful effect of such poetry as this! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
Posted 4 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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4 Years Ago
Lol yes. Judgement. I've been absent from the café for almost 10 years. I'm past caring. Thank you .. read moreLol yes. Judgement. I've been absent from the café for almost 10 years. I'm past caring. Thank you for the review and friend request. I look forward to reading you.
An excellent title and poem. Message is powerful. Feeling of disgust are palpable. Equality is attainable. Love is embraceable. Not speaking out is not excusable.
your pen spills, imagery, that screams out the discontentment,
the true ugliness of humanity.
in again such a creative way...
that it echoes, leaves lacerations.
i especially enjoyed the closing lines. amazingly
penned!
p.s. i sometimes hate hoomans too, always preferred cats
yes, this is a brain on crack---or more evident, a crack in the brain that hates...
we are all eggs in the same box, all have shells, some white, some brown , some whatever, but inside
the yokes are the same...
I love this piece, Muse.
I am happy to see more writings being composed that face the issue head on...and for what it is.
Just plain stupid ...
j.
Posted 4 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
4 Years Ago
Thank you Jacob. I think most of you probably know what I'm feeling and what I really want to say. T.. read moreThank you Jacob. I think most of you probably know what I'm feeling and what I really want to say. To stay politically correct, I must share my feelings with a slight hand and keep my vision subjective. I fear if I don't, I may be hanged on for treason. Stupid is as stupid does.