-Vicarious Dreamer-

-Vicarious Dreamer-

A Poem by Muse

I admired the way
 

she wore the pink skin of flattery,


and I envied the way, her


cheeks blushed red beneath the spilt milk ~

© 2015 Muse


Author's Note

Muse
No I am not back. Just a random little scribble. You can't find me here, nor there. I'm still caught in between somewhere and no where.

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Ah Love............................

Posted 9 Years Ago


Hope all is good my friend looking forward to buy your new work...

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very sensual in a flattering way.. love this snippet of thought Muse ( :

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ha! You are unprecedented in your illusivness.
I think envy can be a complex emotion. It can be a compliment or it can be a cancer...
Here, it feels like something in between... The object is pure and embodies an innocence. Yet the observation flickers towards something darker than admiration.
As always, you layer your words, even when they are few, with bittersweet sugar.
Good to read something new from your pen.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Interesting, something wanted to be conveyed here and is slightly blurred. Wish you were back, sometimes we are needed more then we know.

Be well Muse...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

and so you are missing...yes?...even your thoughts cannot hide, scribbles? maybe, yet if you read past the scribbles, there is more to the thought than we actually see...nice work Muse...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sensual and visceral...tones carry this piece, wherever you are Muse, take care and good to see you :)

Posted 9 Years Ago



Flickerings of brilliance, as motivating as a silver tongue.

Nice...

Posted 9 Years Ago


Just four lines're written with much depth of your heart. Nice imagery. Aside that, your author's note does contain rhyme which's seemed quite fascinating reading the way winds rushing through the sky. Great job!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Oh my gosh this is HOT. You always know how to hit the spot with sexiness...

Posted 9 Years Ago



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