-Vicarious Dreamer-
A Poem by
Muse
I admired the way
she wore the pink skin of flattery,
and I envied the way, her
cheeks blushed red beneath the spilt milk ~
© 2015 Muse
Author's Note
No I am not back. Just a random little scribble. You can't find me here, nor there. I'm still caught in between somewhere and no where.
Reviews
Ah Love............................
Posted 9 Years Ago
Hope all is good my friend looking forward to buy your new work...
Posted 9 Years Ago
Hope all is good my friend looking forward to buy your new work...
Very sensual in a flattering way.. love this snippet of thought Muse ( :
Posted 9 Years Ago
Very sensual in a flattering way.. love this snippet of thought Muse ( :
Ha! You are unprecedented in your illusivness.
I think envy can be a complex emotion. It can be a compliment or it can be a cancer...
Here, it feels like something in between... The object is pure and embodies an innocence. Yet the observation flickers towards something darker than admiration.
As always, you layer your words, even when they are few, with bittersweet sugar.
Good to read something new from your pen.
Posted 9 Years Ago
Ha! You are unprecedented in your illusivness.
I think envy can be a complex emotion. It can be a compliment or it can be a cancer...
Here, it feels like something in between... The object is pure and embodies an innocence. Yet the observation flickers towards something darker than admiration.
As always, you layer your words, even when they are few, with bittersweet sugar.
Good to read something new from your pen.
Interesting, something wanted to be conveyed here and is slightly blurred. Wish you were back, sometimes we are needed more then we know.
Be well Muse...
Posted 9 Years Ago
Interesting, something wanted to be conveyed here and is slightly blurred. Wish you were back, sometimes we are needed more then we know.
Be well Muse...
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
and so you are missing...yes?...even your thoughts cannot hide, scribbles? maybe, yet if you read past the scribbles, there is more to the thought than we actually see...nice work Muse...
Posted 9 Years Ago
and so you are missing...yes?...even your thoughts cannot hide, scribbles? maybe, yet if you read past the scribbles, there is more to the thought than we actually see...nice work Muse...
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Sensual and visceral...tones carry this piece, wherever you are Muse, take care and good to see you :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
Sensual and visceral...tones carry this piece, wherever you are Muse, take care and good to see you :)
Flickerings of brilliance, as motivating as a silver tongue.
Nice...
Posted 9 Years Ago
Flickerings of brilliance, as motivating as a silver tongue.
Nice...
Just four lines're written with much depth of your heart. Nice imagery. Aside that, your author's note does contain rhyme which's seemed quite fascinating reading the way winds rushing through the sky. Great job!
Posted 9 Years Ago
Just four lines're written with much depth of your heart. Nice imagery. Aside that, your author's note does contain rhyme which's seemed quite fascinating reading the way winds rushing through the sky. Great job!
Oh my gosh this is HOT. You always know how to hit the spot with sexiness...
Posted 9 Years Ago
Oh my gosh this is HOT. You always know how to hit the spot with sexiness...
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