-Vicarious Dreamer-

I admired the way

 

she wore the pink skin of flattery,

and I envied the way, her

cheeks blushed red beneath the spilt milk ~

Author's Note

No I am not back. Just a random little scribble. You can't find me here, nor there. I'm still caught in between somewhere and no where.

Reviews

[Ballpark Frank]

I can see definite skill and ability far beyond my own. I'm impressed.

[light and ashes]

Interesting..... I like it.

[Ghost]

I love when I can make my friend blush.. so this was kind of a nice pace to see it written in words thank you for sharing.

[Akshay Rawal]

"cheeks blush red beneath the split milk."
Open ended, and it plays with the reader's thinking.
Thanks.

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of words. You create visions and good place. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Echoes of Eros]

You have a way of painting lines on a canvas, and flooding even the blank spaces in between the brush strokes with hues and colors. Energy flows through light, and even in your dark hallways the energy vibrates richly. xo

[unsavable_soul]

The meaning in this feels personal and possibly much deeper then the simple lines convey. Insight into this "scribble" is on my mind.
I greatly miss you despite our limited time knowing each other. You taught me to embrace things in my writing that I was too timid to accept. Wishing for your return, In a sense you truly are my muse. Miss you.

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

I simply love this! You paint an immediate image with the strike of lightning words that come and go so fast. Very nice.

[fitz Roberts]

Well I'm not back either muse lmfao but I like your scribble tho

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

something about the way this story goes takes my breath away...