Dear Lucifer

 

 

 

 

 

I am well

 

"thank you"

 

 

You asked about the storm

All I can say is

 

 

Yes

 

 

 it still thunders...

 

 

I truly believe that when lightning strikes

it always strikes in the same place twice

There has been no rain

 

 

"to stop the fire"

Therefore

 

 

My make-believe Eden burned to the ground

 

The energy of you

 

 

 

"I still feel"

 

 

 

 when nobody's around

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Dean Kuch®]

No rain to stop the raging inferno, yet, I rein. No thunder to chisel away at the sounds of screaming, but I scream thunderously. No relief from the pain...the misery. Yet, pain & misery are my relief.

This was something else, Muse! Ethereal, sublimely creepy...this was VERY good!

The overall presentation was astounding!

[Renée]

humm suggestion...get some water and douse that Lucifer...I am woman hear me pour! ( over your head)
Your writing always has strength and though this one shows weathering a storm..I have no doubt ..if this was a real incident..lucifer would be wise to straighten up... Well Done !

[Muse]

I sometimes wonder if my Muse is far from innocent. I don't know what inspires me to write such things. Forgive me...I question even myself despite my faith.

[Renée]

Who cares if your muse isn't innocent..it is your page..do as you please! I love your writing and I know you are strong enough to command whatever muse comes your way ( ;

[Muse]

thank you for that. I need to hear that my morbid ideas and creativity is warranted. lol

[Renée]

chuckling ( ;

[Everett DeValle]

I missed your words, Muse...always the artist. Beautiful.

[Muse]

missed all of you too. Summer has a way of distracting the most inspired and uninspired poets. I needed to enjoy the fresh air....find my creative voice.

[Everett DeValle]

I understand...every Poet/Writer needs a break every now and then, Muse...to taje in life as it comes and for what it is...its our personal experience that grows within our voice...and every time you take that break...your voice improves from a different perspective. :)

[Muse]

agreed.

Thank you for that validation. Time away is and should be a good thing.

[Everett DeValle]

I strongly concur validating your agreement. Thou shall be in contentment. :)

[Chris]

Quietly listens... I've missed you.

[Muse]

A quiet observer. There's is much to be learned from you...

[Frieda P]

Took my breath away this one....so unexpected and unique. Short and succinct, it wrapped itself around my brain and yanked to pay close attention, muchly enjoyed. Missed you Muse....great read as always!

[Muse]

Thank you Frieda. It was an on the spot automatic write. Ever done one of those? It took less than three minutes to put together. It will perhaps mean something else to me tomorrow when I reflect upon it.

[Frieda P]

Yes those truly come from the gut, heart and soul, you have to write it, you have no choice in the matter, no wonder it's so affecting, my pleasure always Muse.

[Electric Scribe]

I really enjoyed this :) Go you for being awesome :)

[Muse]

go you? Interesting review, but thank you.

[Electric Scribe]

I am not the best at reviewing, but I get excited for people when they do awesome things. Therefore, I kind of cheer them on with a "go you" or "go you guys" lol. It was a very stellar piece :)

[Muse]

Stellar..even better. :)

[Muse]

This is a very interesting piece of work Muse, I do like the nature aspects compared to human feelings into it, it says so much about how we can feel on a daily basis, or for a longer period. Thunders without rain are dangerous, they are called "dry thunders" here. Nothing to wet (feed the emotions or ground) or to conduct the electricity... sometimes feeling void is the most dangerous thing a human being can feel, (in general). Then there is a point to (for me) mostly write.

A very powerful piece, in all facets. Thank you.
Good to read you again!

- Elisa

[Muse]

Thank you.

You stopping by...just like old times. I've missed you.

I've missed you too, and am very happy to be a witness of your beautiful and pure writings...
I shall pop in anytime :) xo

[s y e]

This is a great, really well worded write, Muse - I loved it. I loved the structure and how there was a little conversation going on, awesomesauce.

~ Noodle.

[Muse]

Thank you. You've gone red? It's adorable. lol But I still know you are a true blonde. ;)

[s y e]

Yes I have, I went a really light red and now I've gone mahogany. :) Ahaha, yep, I'm a true blonde! ;)

[Muse]

can't change what is in the inside sweetie. :D

[s y e]

Nope, wouldn't want to either.