Dear Lucifer

 

 

 

 

 

I am well

 

"thank you"

 

 

You asked about the storm

All I can say is

 

 

Yes

 

 

 it still thunders...

 

 

I truly believe that when lightning strikes

it always strikes in the same place twice

There has been no rain

 

 

"to stop the fire"

Therefore

 

 

My make-believe Eden burned to the ground

 

The energy of you

 

 

 

"I still feel"

 

 

 

 when nobody's around

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Dean Kuch®]

No rain to stop the raging inferno, yet, I rein. No thunder to chisel away at the sounds of screaming, but I scream thunderously. No relief from the pain...the misery. Yet, pain & misery are my relief.

This was something else, Muse! Ethereal, sublimely creepy...this was VERY good!

The overall presentation was astounding!

[Pax]

I have heared my friend is back... now i see she is, coming strong and well... i feel you here, and just remember or this is what i remind myself always - the storm shall pass in time, because things like this doesn't last forever...

it's great to see you!

[Muse]

Pax my beautiful friend! Every storm does pass...and with each storm...we learn to rebuild our hearts again.

[Hana Saemon]

such simple words, but a strong message. love this

[Blissful Sin]

I absolutely love the photo, and the poem is gorgeous also! Fantastic work, Muse.

-Bliss

[Muse]

thank you sweetie. :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Loved the ending. Great job.

[Muse]

thanks for reading me my friend.

[An owl on the moon]

I felt the darkness... could hear it's music playing over the heart... the place of peace destroyed.. abandonment of all that was beauty... and yet, there lingers still those memories that quiet you... let them linger, dear poet... always... xx

[Muse]

I guess I like the challenge of finding beauty in all forms of darkness.

[An owl on the moon]

And you do.. oh, you always do.. one can only see the stars at night, so they say.

[Tate Morgan]

The fire sure burns in you.Quenched by the little girl still yearning for what she never had. Thank you for stopping by yesterday.As with all your work this one has a deeper meaning. I am of the opinion it is a fascination with all you have ever been told is evil and bad. Not to worry you are a good soul and no matter how you try I doubt that will ever change. We appreciate you here.I for one probably don't say it often.But I am honored to be your friend.So don't run from us and stick around.
Tate

[Muse]

honored to have you read me...always was...always will be. :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I got chills reading this...
Very haunting, painful isn't it?.... to still feel his energy, after the storm, after the destruction...
Maybe it's me, but I feel the passion in this... whether it be love or hate... Lucifer does leave his mark.

I love reading your writes...it's like a pieces of puzzle, when it fits together it's a Masterpiece!
Astounding work!~xoxo~:)

[Muse]

it means a lot to have you reading me again. I think there is strange kind a romance in darkness...it has always inspired me.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

and I'm glad you're writing again... I missed reading you. ~xoxo~:)

[Ed Rector]

hallow words to express such gratitude

[Brandon S. Whitten]

People no longer know what is true, except fear. Splendid read and write.

[Muse]

Thank you Brandon.

[Ruth]

You embrace storm and passion...let it immerse and sink and still you come up for air...powerful xx

[Muse]

There's my beautiful girl. :))

[Ruth]

Hello lovely ♥