Dear Lucifer

 

 

 

 

 

I am well

 

"thank you"

 

 

You asked about the storm

All I can say is

 

 

Yes

 

 

 it still thunders...

 

 

I truly believe that when lightning strikes

it always strikes in the same place twice

There has been no rain

 

 

"to stop the fire"

Therefore

 

 

My make-believe Eden burned to the ground

 

The energy of you

 

 

 

"I still feel"

 

 

 

 when nobody's around

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Dean Kuch®]

No rain to stop the raging inferno, yet, I rein. No thunder to chisel away at the sounds of screaming, but I scream thunderously. No relief from the pain...the misery. Yet, pain & misery are my relief.

This was something else, Muse! Ethereal, sublimely creepy...this was VERY good!

The overall presentation was astounding!

[Lyn Anderson]

This is magnificent in its simplicity and profound impactful structure. Wow. I definitely am a new fan, and will be coming back again and again. I know a lot of people don't take RR's and they get lost in the shuffle. If you are so inclined PM me and I will send you links to ones you might like, I think. I have too many to sift through, I think.

[Muse]

I turned my RR's off a long time ago. Now I just read who I want to read. I would love it if you emailed me, linking me to your favorite writes. Otherwise; I will just randomly pick from your library and review whatever tickles my fancy. :)

[wordman]

lots of imagery in this write

[Muse]

thank you..

[wordman]

you are welcome

[Tennessee]

I love this kid as well. He is the peace and calm in the profound storm.

[A. Amos]

You my friend select sharp and smart Titles, as I always enjoyed your writing always a thrill and excitement...

[Lucifer Jones]

I can always pull up a chair and find a beautiful tear, and a smile, in your library. Amazing piece of a beautiful soul. Thank you so much for sharing.

[Muse]

think of it as a tribute to your pen name. lol

[Lucifer Jones]

*smile* That would be an honor... Thanks for the grins...

[PearlPoet]

My make-believe Eden burned to the ground
The energy of you
"I still feel"
when nobody's around"

Very creative verse what this is and your closing is just simply brilliant...

[Muse]

thank you...

[Dye]

I like this morbid sort of writing, I mean that as a compliment. I have always been intrigued by some of the darker insights that others may have. I really enjoyed this conversation, as if between friends.

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Wow. Stunning piece of poetry.

[reeyce smythe wilder]

Dean Kuch said it best. I agree.