This time I could say I was truly inspired by both music and imagery. I wanted to see if I could spin off my own poem based on a famous song and some well-known lyrics. The reverberation of her voice made me feel like I was in a canyon surrounded by beautiful echoes...I tried to share this emotion the best I could, I hope you enjoy it as much as I do.
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And you have certainly achieved your goal.........the way you have formatted your gripping write is like that of an echo descending down the valley of desire while still so much on fire, but the fire being snuffed out little by little....AMAZING!! I love it!!! I am so often inspired by a video, or an image, or both so I can really relate to you wanting to create this piece!!!
A favorite of mine!!
Posted 11 Years Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Glad you understood my vision Sheila...you are a master at presentation...so this is a major complim.. read moreGlad you understood my vision Sheila...you are a master at presentation...so this is a major compliment coming from you.
I got goosebumps while reading this. The music added a taste to it! It was beautiful and it gave off a really unfamiliar feeling. I couldn't explain it but it was definitely a positive one. I felt like the words continued bouncing off against the walls of my room while reading this. Oh my God. I hope I can be as creative as you in writing. You're definitely into it. Excellent work. ^^
Well, based on your author's note, you did what you set out to do, using the medium to its full advantage. Your work lends itself to a multimedia exhibit.
Sounds like an intensely forbidden relationship driven by the passions of knowing you can never be together but in those few secret times. I've been involved in a few of these what can only be described as destructive liaisons. I was entertained at how you presented this. A truly unique style.
I forgot you posted this when you were "Cobra" here... It is always and only ever the true Muse.
Lovely work here. I do like the music you select for y our poems.
I see you are still a poet on fire. ;)
this is amazing, i love how you styled it to match the stanzas and emphasize your work as well as keep the attention of the reader. this is truly a great piece.
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you, that was certainly my aim. Only my words are made bold and clear, I didn't want to be acc.. read moreThank you, that was certainly my aim. Only my words are made bold and clear, I didn't want to be accused of plagiarism.
The way that you have presented this seemed very much like an echo to me even before getting your note. I love the fading in and out with the transparency as well. Beautiful piece. Beautiful words. xx
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