Eraser 11 am
A Poem by Muse
It was like an epiphany
the moment we fell "in love"
with the black horizan
you showed me
that diamonds will burn
if left in the sun
and words on paper
will bleed
if wept upon
time can be powerless
considering we are just human brainless
reckless
© 2014 Muse
Author's Note
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Love it, Muse! The title is interesting, made me go back and re-read. This piece speaks volumes of heartache, but heartache in retrospect, heartache as if had by someone who is almost happy for the experience. The piece is powerful in deed and right to the point. Really good writing here!
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
thank you Lydia, so kind of you to stop by.
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11 Years Ago
thank you...this is just "one" of a series. I started with 8 am...ended with 7pm...considering a wri.. read morethank you...this is just "one" of a series. I started with 8 am...ended with 7pm...considering a write for 8 pm as we speak.
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Added on December 5, 2012
Last Updated on June 8, 2014
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