DAMNED

DAMNED

A Poem by Muse

       

The damned.

Light here, is a vexation and not allowed.



It waits....

for the malaise to ripen the accused;

becoming an accessory, within the jaws of suffering.

A judgement made marvelous by



the slow movements of  hell-fire


     and cirque du soleil.

 

 


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Evil is calm.

All abiding to the spirits of ineffable marveling.

No sound of a beating heart. Only

confusing words spoken from the book,

of a darker art.


Picking, peeling apart, the flesh of forgotten dreams.

A piracy of ruins; filled

with laughing skulls that cannot scream!

 

   

The high court below

sampling every acquired soul.


Humanity

dissolved by the BEAST; leaving

the remnants of hope in a bottomless bowl. It's

quivering lip bites at another jowl. Attending devils,

just hackle and howl.


Etiquette has the pig open wide,

consuming all that forgot to wear the settlement.


Only the purged gets buried without a face.


There's no drop of grace......


no not a trace.

                                             

© 2014 Muse


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If you don't know Odilon Redon or George De Chirico you should do. Symbolism, Surrealism, all here but tied with something more A desperate but incredibly rich and darkly beautiful use of words that fit the darkest and yet most illuminating place. A startling poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Muse

10 Years Ago

I searched both artist. I like them both, Odilon Redon especially. My inspiration was a bit darker t.. read more



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You never disappoint. References to Biblical theology and a vivid warning to all. Asks the question who is doing the damning...is it just the "damned" light? (did you mean to say "the pigs opens"?). Only problem I saw.
Be well!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Muse

12 Years Ago

typo yes will fix it. There was some biblical theology...but I expected few to see it and appreciat.. read more
 David Scott

12 Years Ago

I may not see everything, but I usually get down past the surface. I loved how you openly attacked ".. read more
Muse

12 Years Ago

I wrote another poem sometime back about this sort of thing. Titled it Death's Memento Mori, it was.. read more
Picking, peeling apart the flesh of forgotton dreams. Oh that is just.... MMMM. Loved it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Muse

12 Years Ago

as always..thanks baby.
Evil is calm... picking, peeling apart the flesh of forgotten dreams...

Ethereal and frightening. Sounds without sight. A great read.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Muse

12 Years Ago

Glad you enjoyed my wickedness. Taking count...are you a good Jedi....or a bad Jedi? lol
Mark

12 Years Ago

I'm just an old Jedi trying to keep his light sword in batteries. :)
well ...Damned...you do have a dark streak in ya...and here I thought you were kidding...all the more to create these hellish ideas ...poetic nightmare on the loose...nice work M...

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lily Mae

12 Years Ago

I tried my fairy dust on Art already..he is immune with his new Darth cloak 2000....lol
Muse

12 Years Ago

but he keeps on visiting..ha ha ha....so I think he's in denial. Much love Art. You are light...ne.. read more
Lily Mae

12 Years Ago

Well to truly be of the light you have to embrace that dark night of the soul as I say...xo
I go missing for a bit and you go all wilder on me ;) "
Etiquette has the pigs opens wide,
consuming all that forgot to wear the settlement."
This really gets me with what I've experienced with people lately..
I love the fact that you allow me to walk on the dark side of my own thoughts
as I read you...because to be honest....we don't look there often enough..
To much fairy dust up my a*s ;) lmao Love it xoxoxo


Posted 12 Years Ago


Muse

12 Years Ago

Omg you are too funny. Your fairy dust can be found where the sun doesn't shine. That's what makes.. read more
Lily Mae

12 Years Ago

I think we are a perfect pair lmao..xoxo
Muse

12 Years Ago

Need your help in converting Art. :P
reminds me that the softest part of us is to be found somewhere inside....if i could close my eyes as i read this, i would feel the teeth plunging though

Posted 12 Years Ago


Muse

12 Years Ago

I think that's why I like the macabre sort of writes. Humanity is not being real unless we show our.. read more
why am I hungry after reading this? Think I'll go disembowel some Ramen noodles.
Graphic, heavy, Caligula-esque, Poe on crack..... but nice.

Still got that edge... who is it? pretty HATE machine....a bit too lusciously organic for a machine....

Posted 12 Years Ago


Muse

12 Years Ago

Put some pepper on that. :D
Certainly a perfect poem for the up coming holiday... you could tell that around a camp fire and scare the hell out of everyone.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Muse

12 Years Ago

According to Roarke it just worked up and appetite? lol
Gee, that's swell! Nothin' like a deliciously wicked serving up of the underworld. Love the madly grotesque accompanying image. And the NIN music. Mute shrieks attend the horrific truth of lying souls found out in a just nightmare of reckoning.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Muse

12 Years Ago

Reckoning is served my dear.
Eeeeeeeh, captivating one dear..... almost you whisper to us, with this write. It's hypnotizing, moving, and taking my head almost into the screen, by telling it stap by stap, shrewd and clever. Oh how do I love the NIN music too you picked out! It was for me if I was watching a very good scary movie, and I'm a real critic on those. You have so much talent to write dark poetry! dark queen of art in the cafe, I agree with Lorry, I'm going to hide too!!! ha ha :D xo


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

12 Years Ago

I won't lol, I know it shall never pass ha ha :D and I know you will be satisfied with that, and you.. read more
Muse

12 Years Ago

I really just wanted an excuse to play an evil NIN song. lol

12 Years Ago

You and NIN match! I like that....

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