~ hahahaha......!!!! ~ mirror mirror on the wall... who writes the best wicked witch poetry of all... Muse of course... to shake up your cores... Julius must be spinning in his grave... in reverse... on his head... :P ~ damn...!! ~ you're one helluva courageous cookie, dudette... :)
wow that was really imaginative the upside down writing, like something you would expect from a wicked spell.... this is a cool brew of the things that disturb and make us flinch... reminds me of Macbeth, an interesting concoction and a tantalising read!
That was mind bending ... and distortedly devine. Every spell needs that small reality to become believable....much like affection.
We can kneel while we chant.. swear to the heavens above to recant.
Scream within our darkest dreams .... rise in height where all can be seen.
Within her eyes glows the knowledge of old... her story to remain a future untold.
A beholden beauty she once was... skin china pale, softened by his love.
The wicked works her magic, the queen of toil and dispair...
Fate tugged a glowing spirit, to her withered knarled grasp,
eyes widened in terror...
She snuffed its light without care.
Now she churns whilst bubbles roll unhindered ...as tears spill she cries...
Her brew boils complete, melded together through his lies.
Felt inspired again...been a very long time. Thank you Lady Muse :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
if I inspire you...then let your spirit shine through....I feel your kind energy. It's writers like.. read moreif I inspire you...then let your spirit shine through....I feel your kind energy. It's writers like you..that put the ying in my yang. xx
12 Years Ago
You're welcome. And yes you do inspire us one and all (me greatly) Kindness given in return to kind.. read moreYou're welcome. And yes you do inspire us one and all (me greatly) Kindness given in return to kindness shown (you give to me all the time)
Ying, I like that name...lol :)
:-D Wow! ;-) Just laughing. I have no idea how something can be so light and so dark at the same time, but it works. You are blatant, bold, and out there! Much respect! Thanks for sharing. Xo!