The Discovery

The Discovery

A Poem by La Corza
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A response to my poem The Suicide, please read that first.

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I race through the empty halls

 

-thump thud thump-

 

My footsteps echo all around

 

-thud thump thud-

 

I am searching for you here

 

-huff huh huff-

 

My breath is labored be my fear

 

-huh huff huh-

 

One last door now to open

 

-please no please-

 

A pool of red seeping underneath

 

-no please no-

 

I slowly push open the door

 

-sob gasp sob-

 

Already knowing what I'll find

 

-gasp sob gasp-

 

I see the ebbing flow of blood

 

-drip drop drip-

 

But I am too late, the deed is done

 

-                 -

© 2008 La Corza


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La Corza
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