Adhesive Affection

Haiku poem

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I found you broken

I put you back together

My sticky tape love

Author's Note

I attempted and most likey failed at a haiku. It's for a contest that says to write a haiku about the one you love.
I hope she reads it, I hope it doesn't upset her.

Reviews

[Wondering Mind]

Why on Earth would anyone be upset about such a charming write, my friend?
Lovely

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. it's beautiful ... i love it ... i don't think you failed at a haiku ... you succeeded in writing a beautiful senryu ... (the technicality specialists say that haikus need to have some element of nature but i'm not one of them) ... :) ...

[.]

so cute :)

[jawdriscoll]

Good attempt at a haiku. Because they are so short, a lot of meaning must come through techniques like tone, voice, sound, and sense. Try using some sound techniques like alliteration and assonance to really smooth out the meaning.

[NovaKai]

>.< gahh! I looooveee it!! im not upset!! -huggles-
And you dont fail!!!