Supernova Heartshine

Written for my girl Kaidee Not much else to say

 

 

If today was the last,

I would slip

A ring of Saturn around

Your finger

And watch the ice and

Dust

Melt against your skin

 

We would dance amongs

Jupiter moons

Rotating around us like

Electrons

Of an atom

Because they're negative space

Compared

To our supernova heartbeats

 

Your starshine eyes

Will seek out mine: your

Lashes

Curling like the arms

Of the Milky Way

Veiled

Nebula mystifying in intensity

 

Surrounded by nothingness

You only shine brighter; you are more

Vibrant

But your starlight

Is on the inside

Your Heart

And your veins shine

Like stardust

Through your skin

 

Because to me you are

My star

And I know you are

My wish

That will always

Be true

 

Author's Note

Probably one of my most personal poems, it's for a special girl who probably knows who she is. We love space so it was an obvious choice.

Umm as for reviews, they're appreciated but not totally neccessary. I just needed to get this out of me for someone else to read.

Reviews

[J. R.]

Intensely worded and incredibly honest. I was quite impressed with this one.

[NovaKai]

omg every time i read this i freak out! its the sweetest thing anyones ever written for me!

[NovaKai]

Gahhhh! Nadi its so beautifull! thank you so much! its so sweet XD im going to smother you with hugs when i see you this weekend!

[Hello, Goodbye]

The title is seriously awesome.. Also your poem has some strong feeling to it, backed up well by imagery that keeps our attention.