My many feelings

My many feelings

A Poem by Tobi-Lynn
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it's an anime based story....

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Underneath this mask i wear, there are feelings that i fear
To show you...the one i adore, my so many feelings....and so much more.
Will take so much couage, the kind that i need,
The courage to fight, the courage to lead.
My shy little mask, with the white lavender eyes
Keeps so many secrets, but tells no one lies.
I was forced to face 'him', but he told me to quit,
And so you got mad, and threw him a fit.
You called him a fool, Me; shy, sweet, and kind,
To show him my strength, that's so hard to find.
I found enough courage, to set myself free,
From this cage of pity, so now i can see.
With my Byakugan eyes, and my gentle-fist style,
I found enough courage, to fight for a while.
He hit me in the chest, and i fell to the ground,
He thought i was done, so he then turned around.
"Hinata, get up", is what i heard you cry,
So i stood up on both legs, asking myself "why?"
I don't care if i loose, and i have no need to boast,
But i won't be embarrassed infront of the one i admire the most.
He went in for the kill, to finish the rest,
But then i fell down in cardiac arrest.
I lost the fight, but i prooved my goal,
That now i am stronger, in strength and in soul.
I heard you jump, then run towards me.
Lost now found, and now i'm free.
I opened my eyes, though i fely so brittle,
"N-Naruto........do you think.....i changed...
....maybe j-just......a-alittle?"
Underneath this mask i wear, there are feelings that i fear,
To show you,the one i adore, my so many feelings....and so much more.

© 2008 Tobi-Lynn


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Nicely written

Posted 11 Years Ago


Naruto

Posted 16 Years Ago


Great write!
Great imagery.
~Lyrical

Posted 16 Years Ago



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