Ripple the tune of feeling under the dark sky

the poem is an exploration of human life, emotions, and love.

Ripple the tune of feeling under the dark sky

 

 

Sitting in the garden

Source :Shuttestock.com

gazing at the stars in the dark night

feelings of joy and fear touching the soul

I shouted and shouted with joy to beat the fear inside….

Sudden fall in the warmth inside then a rise in tenderness

A shadow in my heart mingled with the dim light of the moon.

I as a girl with demure

Need delicate care sometimes……

He just come to me with a dulcet touch of love

Efflorescence of a girl as a bud of rose……

Alas!  Ephemeral come again in life

 His Opulent desire separates us

 

A pyrrhic turn changes the game and a traveler is going to solace.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Kindly Read and review my poem. I am open to suggestions that really make me a better poet.

Reviews

[Dennis Wolf]

Well, suggestions I'd have, but I'm not really good at poetry.... Sorry.

Then again, I might just send em in a message to spare me a load of embarrassment haha and you can decide whatever you'd like to use.

Altogether, this one was an enjoyable read, major improvement in your English too (in comparison to your other piece.)

Cheers

[Fnaf fan]

I like Nino this is great! It is so good to see such talented poets in this site!

[Sami Khalil]

Beautiful, delicate and with a slight touch of romance.
Sad at the end.
Enjoyed!

[Mauricio Montoya]

Now this right is deep and so is the write because you're not saying what's outside, love how you choose your words now that's art you brought together a vase with your feelings, love it, you want peace
Thank you for sharing, Excellent write

[Chris Shaw]

Alas love can be fleeting. I felt that here in your words. Really enjoyed the presentation of your poem Ráfia. Thank you.

Chris

[AYVID N]

I felt the longing in your words. This is a beautiful poem to read. Love is ephemeral indeed.