Save Me

Save Me

A Poem by Tony Hwilka
"

Toli's contest

"

Flames within my head

transforms my brain

meter by meter to ashes

 

My mind screams

water -- cold water

please Lord pull me free

 

Away from these flames.

Away from these lifted arms.

linked together, these numberless

feet treading so close.

© 2008 Tony Hwilka


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A very well worded piece and with such meaning. Loved this.

Posted 15 Years Ago


a perfect use of the phrase, Tony. well done. tovli

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on October 21, 2008
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Tony Hwilka
Tony Hwilka

Willingboro, NJ



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In the land of poetry I've been very luckly. I have had my own poetry show on radio station WTTM Trenton N.J. reading my poetry from 1982 -- 1990. Was president of the Southern Poets of N.J. and still.. more..

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