Jack

For Sal's "clerihew contest"

Jack and Jill hiked up the hill

Jack got friendly and kissed Jill

She slapped and punched and kicked him

He fell backwards, down the hill on his face a grin

 

Tony Hwilka 09/24/2008

Reviews

[Salvatore Buttaci]

A funny poem, but not a clerihew and since this is a clerihew contest, yours could not be considered in the winners selection. Check out the other entries to see what a clerihew looks like.

Sal

[Dani California]

LOL! Tony... you're hilarious. Jack assumed.

Good luck w/ the contest !